@wojciechbajor

“Naah, I think the anatomy is fine for the sketch, on top energy and gesture is great with this one!”

“Hi, nice painting! Here is my overpaint. I want to bring your attention towards shadow shapes, and shapes in general. In m over paint I've painted patches of light and shadow with sharp bolder”

“That is perfectly striking depiction, so that I can feel it... Stay strong and take care of yourself.”

“Hi, here is my sketch, how you could tackle the issues you are facing: Indicate her eyes as closed Make her posture straight and empowering, with the arm move forward, suggesting as if she just fi”

“Hi, this is a great illustration, you did a good job rendering. In terms of achieving more three-dimensionality here is a overpaint and some explanations of thought process behinf it. Key to mov”

“Hi, I woudn't add more black, what you need in my opinion is light and shadow separation by color. I did it digitally, to simulate how it could look as if you add some color wash. Using black wi”

“Hi, I like your line art, quality, here is a drawing of what could be a solution to your request. Right now nose is not in the same line as the mouth, so I have moved it. Also made the eye small”

“Good attempt, don't get discouraged, you are making progress :) There are indeed some things to solve, here is a drawing how I would approach them. Generaly if you feel that you are missing asom”

“Hello, here is suggestion as a overpaint. THe diesign is interesting. For improvment I would sugest you to focus on simple forms, how they turn, elements can be simplified to better represent the r”

“Hi, nice drawing. When it comes to color, especially for character, I would suggest to look for some reference, in that case some medieval outfits and flags. That will provide you with some colo”

“Hi Tom, you got this! It is hard to draw human head, even harder is to paint it. Painting is a diffrent approach to from, called mass drawing, if you want to learn more about this from academic pe”

“Hi, here is my over, how I would push your painting further. First I would say there are some issue with form and prespective. Bike and character proportions could be better. As we talk about re”

“Great start of the Inktober, looking forward to see what you draw next, good luck!”

“Hi, here is my overpaint suggestion how to move the portrait further. What you have now is a good base to start "sculpting" with light and color. Things I have done: Made the eye a bit bigger, ”

“I love this, great depiction of a vampire, mixed with clear function and backstory. If you feel something is missing, surley you could explore some more specific clothing, taking a reference from for ”

“Hi, nide deamon drwaing. In addition to feedback you have recived, as a reference you can look at Komodo Dragon and his feet. Hand is too big, and on top of that I think that painting secoind a”

“Hi, this is a sucesfull illustration I would say, the shift in perspective is part of a process and a thing to accept, if I am understanding it right, you seem unhappy how the piece of art turns out a”

“Hi, nice drawing, I like the creature design. As for the feedback I would suggest drawing a background in a style of character and the creature. Tell a story with it, put them in the Oasis, or ”

“Hi, whenever you are designing a creature with a human face, the anatomy of it should following real life, the volumes, rendering of the forms, and so on. Here is my overpaint, how the creature fac”

“Hi, I like your rendering style, you did well in that department. The simplest anwer to what is missing in your illustration would be : correct perspective and form indication. First is the fa”

“Such lovely painting, absolutely adore how you painted her eyes! Thank you for the comment and giving me direction to make my half a Hoarfrost personification, a sister of autumn. Spent some mo”

“Hi, first of all lovely sketch, love it's energy. Here is an overpaint. I would suggest to group the details and create some areas of rest for the design readability. Most natably I have chan”

“Yes, here are two examples how I would solve this body, one is with forms like cylinders and boxes, second follows simplified muscles forms. While using first try to include the body part within th”

“Hi, this is a very nice piece, here are my remarks: 1. If your light direction is from the bottom, you need to emphesize lit the right planes, in that case the bottom ones, insterad adding a rim li”