Hi, here is my sketch, how you could tackle the issues you are facing: Indicate her eyes as closed Make her posture straight and empowering, with the arm move forward, suggesting as if she just finished casting spell. Head held high, slightly tilted, Add some design to her clothing, belt, fancier sleeves. Hope this overpaint will give you some ideas. Keep up the good work!

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Justen Bristlin · 2026-10-09T00:29:59.155Z

This pose and illustration in general I’m struggling with. It reads depressed when I wanted exhausted and something is wrong with the general proportions. I can’t figure out how to get the curve of the shoulder right- as right now it looks dislocated. I’d love any feedback or suggestions though! Thanks!

@wojciechbajor1 week ago

Hi, here is my sketch, how you could tackle the issues you are facing: Indicate her eyes as closed Make her posture straight and empowering, with the arm move forward, suggesting as if she just finished casting spell. Head held high, slightly tilted, Add some design to her clothing, belt, fancier sleeves. Hope this overpaint will give you some ideas. Keep up the good work!

@jaydubbee1 week ago

thanks! Ill be revisiting this image this week to see of I can get some forward momentum on it again, if not its learning :)

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