@wojciechbajor

“Hi, I like how you work with the lines, it is a good direstion. What I want to you to focus is the perspective, you are capturing the character i 3 point perspective, yet you are not ephesising the”

“Hi, I will say that your rendering is working out nicely in terms of metalic surface feel. What is an underlying issue, that feels off is the correct construction of elipses and object in general, ”

“HI, that's a nice idea. No need to be ashemed, you did a first step. What your drawing needs is refinement of forms. Try to pay more attention on how elipses work in perspective, out cuts of one”

“Hi, here is my drawing of the sculpture. For more volume look on the object as set of primitive forms, like cube, cylinder, sphere. Having that orient them in space, by establishing the horizo”

“Hi, here is my answer how you couldestablish the shapes with color, although I would say that it is not the way to go. Values are for shape design, color fills the value shapes, and deliver the inf”

“Hi, to bring volume to your painting you need to think about frrms, like cylinders, and try to indentify where such forms might exist , since snow accumulates and moves. To have volume use gradient”

“Hi, here is a presumed sketch for a hand, since it is hard to see over your lines, I did my best. THe box you are looking for and in my version indiocated in red, in forshortening visible on the re”

“Hi, great piece of art, I like the execution, here are some notes and the overpaint: 1. for story I would move and direct the characters to face the troll, they can protect a shrine, the girl is wi”

“Hi, to paint hair I use this approach: as you mentioned, blocking in big shapes with a color, keep your edges sharp. Neext I select the shape I want to paint inside, here you can do it number”

“Hi, the inking and therfore comic feel is on point, you did a good job! Now, going to your feeling of being lost, it can be tricky to manage bigger scenes, in your case I would say you need to narr”

“Hi, nice attempt, I like where your stylisation is going. To answer your question: 3 point perspective is a slolution to better capturing an angle of this face. If you try to emphasize most of t”

“Hi, good attemtn I like boldness og your knight. Here is how I approach painting metal: I look for simplified forms, like cylinders for arms, fingers, helmet, or cut spheres for shoulder pads an”

“Hi, I like your idea of a planest visible from earth, here is how I would execute it: As the telesope is huge mechanism, make it bigger a center piece of an image, but not in meddle of a compositio”

“Hi, amazing drawing! As I feel a bit anxcious feedbacking my instructor, here is an overpaint with some ideas: Sculpt the eye more with the colors of his skin Reposition the tusks like in stag bee”

“Hi, nice drawing, I like how you treat your lineart. Now onto my feedback: although you asked for colors, I cannot pass on the more important topic: composition and values, I would recommend to go ”

“Hi, that is a really nice drawing, you did a good job! Please don't be so harsh on yourself. Anatomy is okay. Let's focus on flatness. First I introduced some strong cast shadows, using a le”

“Hi, well executed figures! My feedback will be regarding early stages. Try to draw more with simple forms: cylinders, sphere, boxes. As in your finished drawing there is a bit of lack of direction”

“Hello, nicely executed drawing, proportion wise, good base to move further with rendering! The tool I would start with is a basic airbrush / soft brush tool. I would slwoly start adding grays t”

“Hi, first of all I like how you approach your line art, it has nice quality. Here are some suggestions about the design: Towers functioned as last pastion of defense, therfore I moved it from buil”

“Hi, first of all great drawing, I really enjoy looking on the story you are telling! Here is my suggestion how the light might look for your drawing. It all boils down to the idea that when you ar”