Hi, this is a nice drawing, don't be so harsh on yourself. In my opinionm proportions are fine, shat is missing is a contaposto for a pose, if you lower hips, shoulders should follow. Aslo pay attention to perspective of your forms, especially elipses. In feetare for example you indicated mant straight lines, and there should be all elipses. Same for the belt. I like her expression right now, of course if you are not satisfied you should iterate more and test what works for you. Things I would change in terms of her design are her toes, either hide them behiond thights cloth or simplyfy them. ANd length of her upper arms part, I think that they should be a bit shorter. Hope this will give you some answers. Keep up the good work!
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I feel like something is wrong with this drawing, but I can't figure out exactly what. Her body is turned at an angle, but her face looks straight ahead, so the pose feels unnatural. I'm not sure if the problem comes from the head angle, neck, shoulders, or body alignment. Her feet also make her look like she's floating because her stance doesn't feel connected to the ground. I need advice on how to improve her balance, foot placement, and weight distribution. I'm also unhappy with her eyes because her gaze feels too direct and intense, almost like she's staring into my soul. I want her expression to look more natural, but I don't know if I should change the eye shape, size, placement, or direction. I suspect her body proportions are off too, especially around the torso, arms, hips, and legs. I'm struggling to identify which parts look wrong and how they affect the overall pose. Please point out specific anatomy, proportion, perspective, and posing mistakes, and explain how I should fix them. I actually think shes also standing little TOO stiff if you know what i mean