Hello, nice drawing, I like your style. Here is my overpaint and notes. I would push his pose more , broader shoulders, longers more proportional arms, leg forms rendered to indicate its true position, shou ot risen leg rotated in perspective. More volume to his pockets, as he has his hands there. Hope that will give you the answers, keep up the good work!
omg thank you so much for taking the time to review my artwork and provide the overpaint ! the notes are really helpful , especially regarding the pose and proportions i’ll definitely keep these points in mind for my future drawings ! really appreciate it , thank you again 🫶🏻

