Hi, here is my feedback and notes to it: I think his pose is a bit unrealistic, also placment and proportions of th body parts could be adjusted. Hand gripping the staff should respect the stick volume, weapon itself by putting it on a shoulder gives it more weight and power. I have opened his eyes, it gives more flavour to him. Scale and how his gear is ovelapping might be done more thoughtfully. His back legs should be more in shadow and therefor be in darker value. Hope that helps you move the piece forwad, keep up the good work.

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Anonymous · 2026-10-11T15:38:35.708Z

wowie first post here honestly i think my art is pretty solid but i think my colors or shading technique just dosent quite do it for me, i like my way of putting texture so maybe its the colors or my bad sense of shadows for clothes and other stuff, anyways i would like to know what could i do to make this illustration better

@wojciechbajor1 week ago

Hi, here is my feedback and notes to it: I think his pose is a bit unrealistic, also placment and proportions of th body parts could be adjusted. Hand gripping the staff should respect the stick volume, weapon itself by putting it on a shoulder gives it more weight and power. I have opened his eyes, it gives more flavour to him. Scale and how his gear is ovelapping might be done more thoughtfully. His back legs should be more in shadow and therefor be in darker value. Hope that helps you move the piece forwad, keep up the good work.

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