Hi, first I will say that your hatching is nice, and I like the way you stylize your shapes, a bit Bridgmanesque. My feedback is about underlying anatomical problem this hand is having. Fingers have more volume as they turn away from us, finger on which coin is placed will be positioned more horizontal, thumb is locatd a bit off in your drawing. If you reference a similiar gesture you will have more ideas what there is to crosshatch to better suggest structure of a hand. Hope that will help you, keep up the good work!

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Riku Hiirikoski · 2026-10-12T12:19:43.810Z

I've realized time and time again that when I try to crosshatch it just looks off. So I had to press the super undo button, start over and do it with simpler lines and no crosshatching.

@wojciechbajor1 week ago

Hi, first I will say that your hatching is nice, and I like the way you stylize your shapes, a bit Bridgmanesque. My feedback is about underlying anatomical problem this hand is having. Fingers have more volume as they turn away from us, finger on which coin is placed will be positioned more horizontal, thumb is locatd a bit off in your drawing. If you reference a similiar gesture you will have more ideas what there is to crosshatch to better suggest structure of a hand. Hope that will help you, keep up the good work!

Day 12 - toss

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