Hi, great drawing! Here is my overpaint and notes: I would make her stand in a heroic pose, hair blown with the wind, rather than lying down (if I read the sketch correctly) Her pendant in her palm, the ghost hand should be more masculine and she is making a contact with it, her fingers dips into a plasma, shw cries with both eyes open, looking proudly into what is in front of her, made the sword also visibel as part of her strot, but placed in a way that suggest that it is a secondary element. Part of her face is sunken into a ghost hand. The underlying idea is that she is entangled and living in her past and in the world of the dead rather than in her present. As for light and color I see this piece in pallete of Donato Giancola, or as the topic is symbolic Jacek Malczewski. Hope that will give you some ideas, keep up the good work! | Artwod Feedback