This pose and illustration in general I’m struggling with. It reads depressed when I wanted exhausted and something is wrong with the general proportions. I can’t figure out how to get the curve of the shoulder right- as right now it looks dislocated. I’d love any feedback or suggestions though! Thanks!

This pose and illustration in general I’m struggling with. It reads depressed when I wanted exhausted and something is wrong with the general proportions. I can’t figure out how to get the curve of the shoulder right- as right now it looks dislocated. I’d love any feedback or suggestions though! Thanks! | Artwod Feedback