@giraslash95106056

“Hey there! I think you did an awesome job already, well done! I kinda pushed around some stuff based on anatomy and a bit more realistic proportions, but ofc I don't exactly know how the ref exactl...”

“Hey there! First of all, these look amazing, very well done! The major adjustment I suggest, is about pushing the buldge of the mouth to be a bit less extreme. I think that's why it kind of looks l...”

“Hey there! First of all, I think you did a great job with her design, well done! Two thing's I'd suggest: 1. The positioning of her breast did anatomically not make a lot of sense, so I pushed it d...”

“Hey there! First of all, I absolutely love the city in the background and her non generic face. Well done! Two things I'd like to suggest: 1. Black on White or White on Black: I think the main ...”

“Hey there! First of all, great job on the overall values, the brightness already resembles the reference quite well! Two things I'd like to suggest: 1. To make your light side look more like the...”

“Hey there! Huge improvement, well done! I think that she already is recognizable here. You might also be correct about the eyes being slightly too big, but everything else is very believable. To get t...”

“Hey there! First of all, this looks like a great success, well done completing the road! One thing I'd suggest to push this further, is to start flipping your canvas or watching the image in the m...”

“Hey there! Once again, your features look great here, well done! I think the way they are placed in perspective might cause some of your issues here. Our brains unconsciously often trick us into dr...”

“Hey there! First of all, you absolutely did an amazing job with these heads already, not too much I can critique here! One thing I recognized, which might push these even further, is the general sh...”

“Hey there once more! I don't think I was able to snatch the exact same reference, but at least a very similar one. Two things I wanted to demonstrate and suggest: 1. As you can see in the image, I ...”

“Hey there! First of all, I love the style of these heads, well done! I think to get you closer towards what you're aiming for, we'd have to take a look at how the different features of the face wer...”

“Hey there! First of all, the way you drew and shaded the features of the face is already really good, well done! I think what might have threw you off here is mainly about proportion and volume. Tw...”

“Hey there once more! First of all, I'm happy the previous feedback was useful and as I can see, we've got another portrait to work with here! I think you did a good job with the measurements of thi...”

“Hey there! First of all, you did an amazing job with the proportions of the head, well done! I think what threw you off here is more about the way you drew the seperate features of the face. In the...”

“Hey there! First of all, consciously doing studies like this, will skyrocket your skill, keep at it! Regarding your questions: 1. We often draw the eye like we imagine it to be (mostly too detailed...”

“Hey there! First of all, I think you did an amazing job understanding and applying the base structure of the eye, well done! The angles you're struggling with are very tricky. In perspectives like ...”

“Hey there! First of all, I think that the sizing of the general shapes you chose do work well with the human proportions! What threw you off here, likely has to do with your knowledge about the for...”

“Hey there! First of all, I think your struggle might be cause by focusing on multiple things, like construction, shading and proportions, at once. Doing studies like this, I'd suggest not caring a...”

“Hey there! First of all, I think that generally the local colors are well selected! I also do think that color isn't the main thing that's throwing you off here. Much rather it's the values and the...”

“Hey there, first of all, I think you did an amazing job regarding the composition. Well done! I also do think that the composition is lit quite well, mainly due to the low contrast. Here's how I'd ...”

“Hey there! First of all, I really do like your hatching and overall expression here, well done! The thing about anatomy with this one is, that it's really stylized and applying accurate human anato...”

“Hey there! First of all, I think you did an amazing job with the storytelling and compositioning with this one, well done! Two things I'd love to suggest: 1. A Vignette effect to push the atmosp...”

“Hey there! First of all, I think you did an amazing job here already, well done! There's just one thing that came to my mind looking at this and it's more of a perspective thing: Defining the mi...”

“Hey there! First of all, I think you already did a good job with the rendering over all. Your desicions seem to be very distinct! Three thinks I'd like to suggest: 1. Softness in the shadows: Am...”

“Hey there! First of all you did a great job with the loomis head. The general proportions of the head and the thirds do already work here. It's the proportions that might have threw you off the mos...”

“Hey there! First of all, I think you did a great job regarding the atmosphere. There might be some things you could improve by suggesting the fireplace itself, but over all it's believable. I'd muc...”

“Hey there! First of all, this already is a great portrait. The proportions are on point! At this stage it's almost purely about the shading and how it contributes to the form of the face. Off of th...”

“Hey there! First of all, I think you did a great job on the subtle shading, especially the nose! I think what might have threw you off the most here, was the distance between the eyes and their siz...”

“Hey there once more! Glad to hear the feedback was somewhat useful! It's always great experimenting around, so I wouldn't call your darken layer a move towards the wrong direciton. It might have ev...”

“Hey there! First of all, I think your over all facial structure is very believable, well done! It's another good thing, that you already identified your own struggle. It is the forehead.. or gener...”

“Hey there! First off, I think you already did an amazing job regarding proportions and general facial structure, well done! Two things I'd love to suggest: 1. The Values: I brightened her whole ...”

“Hey there, it's great being brave and blending color surely always IS frightening brrrr! You're asking for a starting point and I'd love to suggest you one with two simple ratios to always get your...”

“Hey there! First of all, I think you already created yourself a good foundation for further rendering, well done! What I'd suggest at this stage is being more confident and bold with different val...”

“Hallo! Ich finde du kannst grundsätzlich die wesentlichen Proportionen zu einem Großteil bereits gut anwenden. Insbesondere der Kopf unten links ist dir gut gelungen! Beim Kopf oben rechts schlage ...”

“Hey there! A study, we love to see it! I tried to adress the areas you've pointed out, so let's take a look a them. The Eyebrow area: I think the main struggle you've had here is the hard edge b...”