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Hey there! I think you did an awesome job already, well done! I kinda pushed around some stuff based on anatomy and a bit more realistic proportions, but ofc I don't exactly know how the ref exactly looks like. Keep up the great work!
Hey there! I took the correction that Giraslash made already to the proportions :D I'm not the best at hatching things (a technique I didn't practice too often), but you have to follow the direction of the form so you can trace the lines according to it, instead of just drawing straight lines (you didn't to this tho). I said some other things on the video. But generally speaking, just follow the form of the body, and I'd recommend you to look at artists you like and mimic the way they do it :D Hope this helps!
It's really good! The hair is great, and I think the proportions are mostly good. I think you can see a little too much of the right eye if it is completely side view. The eye looks almost like it is a 3/4 view for the eye.
Improve your features and structure, a 3 min read
Build expressive portraits using the Loomis head method, Reilly rhythms, and shadow mapping to establish structure, flow, and clear lighting before adding final details.
Portraits
Mermaid
Made improvment of the hands.
WIP Jay Enhypen
I am struggling with capturing his face from my refrence, I made a mistake with choosing my reference a bit, I chose the refrence pose where the face wasn't fully visible and used other refrence for his face so I had to adjust the face angle and how he is looking at the viewer which led to facial structure changes, I can't add my reference in this site because it doesn't support more images. I want you to help me with how do I make look more like Jay.
Page 2 (day 2)
Page 2 (day 2) Trying to be consistent with the challenge. In this drawing, can someone teach me how to make simple backgrounds? ( Other adivces is good too!)
2 sketchbook page
Some arm studys. I wanted to practice the anatomy for the ice arm of the eleven archer character
About linework in general
I finished it by adding this little walrus imp thing. I believe this is currently the absolute limit of my abilities. If there is anything to improve in this i am currently blind to it. I see this as a problem, since if i do not recognize my mistakes i cannot improve further, therefore if anyone can poke holes in this it would be deeply appreciated. Or maybe i should just start learning values already, since linework is kinda the only thing i've ever done.
Ice archer
I got some feedback and tried Applying it, but my request still stands. I think it’s better now, but it could be even better, so any advice on the render or materials like the leather or the ice would help. Thanks!
Behemoth thumbnail idea
I feel like I’m struggle with a few parts to this piece. First one is just the anatomy of the giant. The stomping foot over the figure seems off or maybe it’s the alignment of the back leg. I feel like I like this angle and composition but maybe it’s not as believable as it should be? Any help would be amazing! Also I’m sure I should adjust the colors too, it’s supposed to be a snowy mountain like landscape but I didn’t really set up a good foundation to depict that. Many thanks to all you talented helpers!
Day 2 : Watercolour Foxgloves
Time to dust off the watercolours!
June 2th again again
Day 2 of the Artwod June challenge. Trying to use boxes, cylinders, and form manipilaton that i've learned on the Artwod drawing basics course :) reposting because i put it in the wrong category And i had to fix the leg...