Hey there! First of all, I think that generally the local colors are well selected! I also do think that color isn't the main thing that's throwing you off here. Much rather it's the values and the light set-up. It's hard to tell, but judging by the darkness of the image, I assume you wanted to achieve a glowy mood, with only the hair being a lightsource.(?) In this case, either most of the shapes would have to be lost in shadows, or the light from the hair would have to be strenghtened by an unrealistic amount, to make the whole scene readable like this. To solve this, I increased the glow of the hair a bit (also shining on other objects) and introduced a soft ambient light to brighten up the whole scene. Everything else I adjusted are just minor differences regarding form and shape, I prefer. These are not all too relevant for the underlying problem you face. I hope this helps and keep the good work up!
