Hey there once more! First of all, I'm happy the previous feedback was useful and as I can see, we've got another portrait to work with here! I think you did a good job with the measurements of this one! The only things I changed slightly, were the distance between the eyes and the size of the nose. Two things I'd suggest: 1. Let's take the lips for example: Here, it's a common thing that some artists outline the whole shape, making it look too seperated. This happens because looking at the reference, you might see a sharp difference in color. Just remember, that a change of color isn't significant to placing lines there. Much more, sharp differences in value determine where lines should be. 2. The thickness of the lines. It's a good thing you think about occlusion shadows underneath the chin, but at this stage of the portrait it makes the whole scene look a bit out of balance. I'd suggest not worrying about it just now! Instead a very useful general tipp, is to give some thickness to the very outlines of your portrait. This usually makes the whole face look more framed and pops the silhouette more! I hope this helps and keep the work up!
