Sopranos sketch

I feel quite happy about how this turned out but I would like critique on any ways the form or way the features sit on on the planes etc might be off. Also things to consider when constructing the head in this way would be helpful. Tips on linework or rendering with biro also appreciated

Portraits

Hi Any help with the portions or lighting would be great , specifically the female ones ( the ones on the right ) Thanks

Boar Creature

I love to get some feedback on this creature design. I'm unsure about the proportions and the coloring.

Portrait of a lady with a rose ?

I think there is something wrong with the face proportion and rendering …also cloth anatomy and hair

my character design. trying to build my own character in different cultures

is the pose and correct

Kazmo kramer

General

PheemPan

I'm really struggling with the features and the head. It felt like something is off here especially the 3/4th head.

Fancy Dwarf Guy

This started out as a practice in unique head shapes and turning them in space, but it turned into a dwarf guy in a bow tie. Is the perspective working out? Any other thoughts? Thanks

Redraw of an old piece - yandere bunny Belphie

Decided to go with version B based on feedback. Changed the angle a bit. Rough sketch before rendering. Could use help with anatomy >.<