@jeremyr

“It doesn’t look like trash to me. You’ve got the right idea about following the contours of the form and the shading you had already done made sense. Understanding shading is really just about unde”

“That’s a difficult question to answer properly without knowing where your light source is and what the image as a whole looks like. Essentially a corset is a cylinder. So to understand how to shade”

“Hi, pretty good effort and your character is easily recognizable so well done there. Rather than asking if it looks good, you should instead ask yourself “does this look how I imagined?” I think y”

“Hi, that’s a great illustration. Really cool idea. I wouldn’t worry too much about the rendering. Instead I would focus more on the form and pose. The way your character is standing feels a little”

“Hi, so firstly I think the drawing is great and I don’t think you have any real issues with the anatomy. There are a few things I could nitpick but I don’t think that’s necessary. One small nitpick”

“To draw the head at different angles you need to understand the basic form of the head. The Loomis method is a great starting point because it teaches the head as simple shapes. It looks like you’re”

“Very nice illustration. A couple of things I would point out. The first is to follow the contours of the form. The lines don’t just indicate shadow but also the shape of an object. So the area around ”

“I think the issue is there’s a disconnect between her upper torso and her pelvis. This is exacerbated by the line of her shoulders being the same as her pelvis. You just need to spend a little more ti”

“This is maybe not what you want to hear but it’s what you need to understand. You need to focus first on understanding form. Basic 3D shapes and breaking the human form into a simple mannequin will he”

“They’re not too far off to be honest. There’s a few differences around the epicanthic folds and the bottom of the right eye is sitting slightly above your guideline. A few more guidelines will help in”

“The hair and pony tail look decent, it’s the neck and face profile that were off. The neck should be more angled (it tilts forward in order to support the head) and the proportions of the face need m”

“Try to focus more on the underlying structure and form. Drawing with simple shapes will allow you to more easily adjust the proportions of your characters as well as allowing you to create more dynami”

“Being able to draw from imagination and rotate objects really just comes down to how well you understand form and perspective. What you want to do is break the object down into simpler shapes that you”

“Hi there, Using reference is good, and you should definitely keep using it. The issue is your drawing lacks form. You’ve copied the reference by drawing the outline and that’s why it looks stiff. ”

“Hi there, You’re pretty close, you just need to push certain aspects of the pose to really sell it. If you’re ever unsure about how something should look like, use reference. Even if that mean”

“Hi there, I think you’ve got a fantastic drawing there. I see two friends taking a selfie together. Your line quality is good and the perspective makes sense. The only thing I’ve changed is to p”

“Hi there, That’s actually a pretty good doodle. I like the expression you’ve given the character and the overall pose. For the shaky lines it really just comes down to practice. If you’re new ”

“I’m really liking where this is going. Please excuse my rough overdrawing. I don’t have a lot of experience drawing legs like this but the way I try to think about then is that they’re standing on the”

“Firstly I love the details and the line quality. You’ve got a lot of talent there. Unfortunately the pose is lacking structure or form. The ear looks like it’s attached a little too far forward. ”

“Hi there, Yes perspective can be challenging to learn, but don’t worry you’re on the right track. The main reason your 2nd and 3rd cylinders look off is because you’ve not actually drawn a cylinde”

“Hi there, Yes perspective can be challenging to learn, but don’t worry you’re on the right track. The main reason your 2nd and 3rd cylinders look off is because you’ve not actually drawn a cylinde”

“Hi there. That’s a pretty good image. It would be useful if you could be more specific on what you would like feedback on. A big part of the learning process is analyzing your own work and trying to f”

“The challenge with this exercise is you have to keep in mind the planes of the objects. When they intersect you need to follow those planes. The trick is being able to estimate where those intersectio”

“That’s a pretty good attempt. I think what might be throwing you off a bit is you’re not following your own construction lines. First thing I noticed was her nose was off centre, so I changed its posi”