Hi, so firstly I think the drawing is great and I don’t think you have any real issues with the anatomy. There are a few things I could nitpick but I don’t think that’s necessary. One small nitpick is your linework. The linework is very clean, almost too clean. There’s no real variation in your linework which makes the image look very flat. More variety in the thickness of the lines can help indicate light, shadow and form giving the image a lot more depth. The main thing I want to talk about is how you approach an illustration. The best art advice I’ve ever heard is “tell a story”. It doesn’t have to be a novel but there should be something about the character that you are communicating to the audience. You mentioned wanting “unsettling vampire lady vibes” but I’m not really getting that from what you’ve drawn. She doesn’t really read as vampire. There’s some nice detailing around her eyes with the bat like eyelashes and the pupils, but it’s mostly drowned out by the rest of the image. Because your linework is very uniform it drags the viewers attention away from that detail. So to have her read as vampire, if you’re not going to give her fangs, you need to highlight and emphasize the detail that tells the viewer what she is. So rather than a full body image, a close up of her eyes would serve that narrative. But if you do want to show off that fantastic dress you’ve drawn then you need to play with the perspective and think about how you can convey unsettling and vampire. So for example a low horizon angle where you’re looking up at her will make her appear more intimidating. Conversely, the opposite would normally make her appear small and weak (looking down at her) but by playing around with the expression you can make her seem unsettling. Other options are if she’s looking over her shoulder at the viewer or maybe she’s looking up at the viewer with her head tilted. There’s lot of different ways you can make her look unsettling. What I’ve drawn is super rough and that’s a good place to start. Just very loosely sketching out a few ideas, playing around with the pose and the angles to see what you like. It’s what some artists call thumbnailing and it’s a great way to explore ideas without getting too invested in any single direction. If you’re not sure where to start then go look for references and inspiration. Look at how other artists do it and think about how you can use those ideas. | Artwod Feedback