Hi, that’s a great illustration. Really cool idea. I wouldn’t worry too much about the rendering. Instead I would focus more on the form and pose. The way your character is standing feels a little awkward. Is she standing or is she supposed to be crouching? It’s not very clear and it’s not a natural way to stand so I’ve sketched in two examples to consider. I also changed the arm holding the knife. If you have her holding it in front of her it will help tell the story of her protecting her children. | Artwod Feedback