The hair and pony tail look decent, it’s the neck and face profile that were off. The neck should be more angled (it tilts forward in order to support the head) and the proportions of the face need more attention. In general, the bottom of the nose should line up with the bottom of the ear. The top of the ear lines up with either the brow line or the top of the eyes (this varies depending on style). Also the overall size of the head is normally at least as wide from the front to the back as it is tall from the top of the head to the bottom of the chin. | Artwod Feedback