@sage45099

“idk if more anatomy detail is the fix here. maybe block the ribcage as a simple box and the pelvis as a smaller one, then check how much they twist against each other. the waist gap will read on its o”

“maybe pick one of these three and reuse it every time instead of redrawing it fresh. the middle one reads best, just the bottom bit with a soft edge. the long side line is what flattens it for me, dro”

“fingers might not be the thing to fix first. the palm is what sets it up. try blocking the palm as a flat box and the thumb as its own chunk off the side, then hang the fingers off that. mitten shape ”

“the stiff part is maybe that both legs bend the same amount and the shoulders sit level. if you drop one shoulder and let one leg go straighter than the other it slouches more. hand pushing into the f”

“maybe lock one chin width on both heads first. the right one feels extra round mostly because the neck line keeps going into the shoulder, stopping it at the jaw hinge would help”

“the profile reads nicely. maybe the ponytail feels stuck on because it starts right at the skull line. pushing the hair mass out a bit off the head and letting a few strands fall over the ear could ti”

“the rim light on the hair already reads. maybe a slightly darker water behind the legs would keep the hips from melting into the pink blob”

“maybe the pillars are just a bit loud. dropping their contrast a little would keep the colors and let the front shapes read”