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“sorry for the double feedback but i just noticed it isnt visible in the other comment ç_ç ( i dunno if you can download the feedback image as it is and not as i see it on the site)”

“Hi! So, i tried to give you some help on the values, and i think i've spotted the issue ( just because i did this a million times myself ç_ç) you design and then you try to bend the values after you d...”

“Hi! Honestly these look very good, but if you struggle with the concept you can try using a notan method without any blending to get the hang of it. I always put small details right away, and only rec...”

“Hi! First of all good job! In the correction i just did what you said, i separated a little bit more the 3 planes to have a better reading with just a couple of layers with a grey put on screen ...”

“Hello! Generally speaking they look awesome, but since you posted here for help i thought to do some nitpicking to help you score the next level! These correction are little things, nothing majo...”

“Hello! Even tho is messy everything looks in this place, the only thing i'd suggest you do is highlight the overlap in between forms to have a clearer representation of foreshortening! Its some...”

“Hello! First of all , amazing work! (even cause she was my main in season 3 XD) I think here you just have the classic example of tired eyes cause probably you worked a lot on this piece. The...”

“Hi! I tried to come to the rescue regarding arms and forearms with an overpaint, being it super fast is not 100% perfect but i hope it helps! As for the stiffness, try to smooth the harsh curve...”

“Hello! First of all, you're not alone, hands are complicated! So i like to imagine them as a roof tile and a chicken drumstick, to have a base. If you struggle with the general hand shape, st...”

“hello! You picked a fair difficult one! (it took me forever to understand shoulder blade & arm ) but i tried to do a recap for you. Basically the arm is connected at the scapular bone and cl...”

“Hello! Actually this works pretty well even looking at it in bw, so you're good to go honestly. If i had to do neat picking i'd just say to change a tiny bit the values from plane to plane to have ...”

“Hi! First of all good job, cause you arent that far from understanding the style. What you lack here is strong shadows typical of the disco elysium style, and you have to think about that shift...”

“Helloooo! I wanna start by saying this is not an easy task, cause it has multiple challenges inside of it : 1. line of action 2. puppet in space 3.anatomy 4. folds But if i have to pick one lin...”

“Hello! The piece looks good, the only thing is about materials. Generally speaking i'd advise you to take a look at things separately, like doing some studies on leather and some on clothing. E...”

“Hello! You're doing fine, and the baseline of everything we need to learn sadly is struggle XD I hope my writing is clear, but generally speaking the main issue i see here lays in the value ran...”

“Hello! First of all good job, cause what you want to do is no easy task! I'd like to suggest you a streamlined approach so you can have consistent results in your pieces : 1) sketch an idea 2) tr...”

“Hello! I dunno how the roadmap works, but generally speaking to start with faces in perspective is always good to have some kind of anchors along the way. Cause the face has a ton of geometric sh...”

“Hello! First of all, this is not easy stuff, so when not properly trained for quite some time its difficult! Buuuut primitive forms are your friends in this case, and instead of thinking about a f...”

“Hello! First of all, good job! Secondly, sorry for the super quick fix! So, the main issues i encountered arent about the detailing, but about the coherence of the light type. From what i've gathe...”

“So, i'm new to this platform but i hope you can download the full image, since i cannot for the life of me draw directly on the app XD . You don't struggle because of an issue of yours, you struggle c...”