Hello! Even tho is messy everything looks in this place, the only thing i'd suggest you do is highlight the overlap in between forms to have a clearer representation of foreshortening! Its something that you'll learn with time, but its fundalmental to have the sense of something going away or turning towards us! Hope it helped, i have issues explaining this concept even in my first language, so in english i fear its a little bit confusing XD but you can try to look at stuff done by other artists and look specifically at how a form intersects into another one depending on wheter is coming towards us or away from us. Keep it up! | Artwod Feedback