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Hi! First of all good job! In the correction i just did what you said, i separated a little bit more the 3 planes to have a better reading with just a couple of layers with a grey put on screen mode. I wanna see how this develops! (i'm studying the same thing in these months, so i feel less alone when i see others encountering my struggles XD )
Hey! So cool scene so far! :D Something quick: I'd make the characters in the MG a bit smaller to let the composition breathe a bit since it felt "tight", so to speak, and make the characters in the FG slightly bigger and separate them a bit. You can even move the right one more to the left. Make the archer a bit smaller too, i left it a bit bigger hehe. Make the FG darker and the MG brighter for better separation between the planes . Hope this helps!
Improve your fundamentals, a 3 min read
Master form manipulation, study artist styles, and exaggerate features to transform realistic anatomy into dynamic, expressive characters with your own unique flair.
Figure
Page
coming up with more interesting shapes
Daily sketch page, day 2
Trying to incorporate stuff I learned from portrait road. Drew my OC this time. Struggling with keeping face looking the same in all angles (and fail :x)
Sketchbook pages 01
Hey everyone! this is my first post here - I’m super excited to share some of my art with you all! I really want to improve my compositional/perspective skills during this month’s challenge. But my main goal is just to have fun and make cool drawings :D - I appreciate any feedback you can give me for my first entry for the challenge :D
David
One thing I constantly struggle with is rendering it always feels as if I’m missing a step or theirs a gap between my knowledge. Feel free to critique my lighting, shading, and etc.
Day 2 Jacqueline's Sketchbook
A Knysna Turaco bird in Art Nouveau style
Mermaid
Made improvment of the hands.
WIP Jay Enhypen
I am struggling with capturing his face from my refrence, I made a mistake with choosing my reference a bit, I chose the refrence pose where the face wasn't fully visible and used other refrence for his face so I had to adjust the face angle and how he is looking at the viewer which led to facial structure changes, I can't add my reference in this site because it doesn't support more images. I want you to help me with how do I make look more like Jay.
Page 2 (day 2)
Page 2 (day 2) Trying to be consistent with the challenge. In this drawing, can someone teach me how to make simple backgrounds? ( Other adivces is good too!)
2 sketchbook page
Some arm studys. I wanted to practice the anatomy for the ice arm of the eleven archer character