Hello! First of all, good job! Secondly, sorry for the super quick fix! So, the main issues i encountered arent about the detailing, but about the coherence of the light type. From what i've gathered is a cloudy day, in which you cannot have super dark values, except in crevices and such. So, i flattened the general values, mantaining them only on the focus ( using some compositive values to convey the main focus). I also pumped up the light from the wand,cause i think its the first thing you wanna people to look at, and as result i added some reflections of it on him, in order to have him pop on the background. I moved a little bit the drake on the right, cause it was too centered and too continuous with the character, creating a tangent. I also moved up a bit the eye of the character to center him in perspective. I'm always super shy about touching other artists work, but i hope i helped you a little bit! And by the way you're not far, the base is very good! Have a nice day! | Artwod Feedback