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#14
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“Last but not least, tried to clean up a bit and create some textures.”
“Overall, nice work. The perspective look nice and you seems to get the idea of a One point perspective. (or one vanishing point) Here I will pinpoint the chemney that is on one point perspective...”
“Hello, Je constate que tu t'exprime en Français. Dans le doute, je vais continuer dans cette voix. Fait moi savoir si je dois switcher en anglais. De manière général, je pense que tout fonctionne, ...”
“First of all, very nice mood for the scene and very cool shot. I would give extra care to the perspective since it's a 3 point one and these are cheeky, so I retraced the sofa and I tried and give ...”
“Hello, I think you did a great job and at this point it's slight changes that need to be made, but nothing to dramatic. I would suggest you to trace clear landmarks in order to help you finding ...”
“Nice spear warrior! Foreshortening is a nice but complicated topic as most of the time our brain will try and reconstruct the entire object we try to convey. So basically our conception of thi...”
“Hello ! I think so far you've done a nice job at capturing the mood of your character and the emotion. Most of the drawing is fine. I think what you're missing is more volume cues in order to c...”
“I realise after giving my first feedback that you might want the character to be on a stationary pose. If so it's mostly your left leg that is in a position suggesting movement and so I would reco...”
“I feel that so far your drawing is nice. Your lines have a good quality and smooth. (remind me of Loomis drawings) I think what's betray your drawing are the feet and their position. I redraw them ...”
“Very nice Drawing, love the color scheme, and your iconic Ruy and Chun-Li from Street Fighters. If you want to improve your forshortening, I would recommand trying to draw a lot of cylinders in per...”
“Hi there, I was passing by and saw your work. Your forms are quite nice and I was thinking that if growth feels like a long journey and a struggle, you should try and make it more playful. For a...”
“Hello hello, late for the party but I hope this feedback will find you. Nice piece! You have a nice silhouette, with a nice composition and very playfull character. I also love your style. S...”
“I think overall, you did a great job in structuring your volumes and I think you get the idea of reproducing a pose. Silouhette is nice and readable. Regarding the Horizon line, here I think you ca...”
“Hello Jord, Very nice turn from a bird's eye view. The propotions seems correct and match every views, I would work mostly on the width of the right head. It's slightly narrow than the other two. ...”
“Hello Ian, Nice interaction between two characters, the composition is nice and you also had a bit of context with the table which is important in my opinion when you want to convey a scene. And we...”
“First of all, I want to know if you used any reference and if so, which one ? I understand that you're trying and bring life into an inanimate object. I would say you have volume in your drawing, ...”
“Hello, Overall nice challenge (you seemed to have survive, hopefully we can get another 100 round XD) I think you did a nice job in getting the pose and a bit of the gesture as well, your spati...”
“Hello, Since I didn't saw the reference you used, I tried and guess what was going on . I'm pretty sure you headed for a 3 point perspective of a hallway and I can already tell it must have bee...”
“Hello ! First of all, very nice monster, Proportions looks pretty good, rythm and silhouette are pretty nice as well, and your beast looks like it came straight out of a 30's movie. Frontier bet...”
“Regarding Weight line, I think first of all, you can do a lot of Line tracing exercice juggling between thick and thin line. It will ease your line when it comes to draw anything (especially if you wa...”
“And I forgot the Paint over, my bad.”
“Hello, Above all, nice proportions and I love the design of your character. I think what's lacking in here is balance and perspective. If you look at Human body structure, even if it looks li...”
“Hello, Very nice Grey matter impression. The volumes and the colors are nicely done. For the cast shadow I think you should keep your perspective ON in order to keep the sense of it. On the r...”
“Hello First of all, really lovely drawing. The pose of the characters and your confident line share your interest and your knowledge of figure drawing. Your proportions are slightly off, but s...”
“Very nice work of inking. In order to improve your workflow, I would suggest to ask few questions before you start your drawing. Most of the time it's mainly problem solving what's in front of y...”
“First of all, very nice work. It has a Katsuya Terada vibe in it. Great piece ! You mention Perspective in your question and so that's where I will put the emphasize. We can improve that a...”
“So far I think you nailed the drawing. Proportions are nice and fair, volume and perspective is correct. I would just trace on the flat top of the remote to adjust all the button and volumes. (kee...”
