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“Hello there! Well done here! :D Just a few small adjustments to the proportions. The legs were a little too long, as well as the right forearm. The torso was also slightly elongated. I adjust...”

“Hey! Great job, and nice implementation of the feedback you received earlier! :) That said, I still feel the lighting is a bit inconsistent. I understand that the main light source is coming fro...”

“Hey there! This is something that commonly happens when someone focuses only on the character's face. It's easy to forget about the width of the shoulders, and right now your character doesn't real...”

“Hey there! Overall, the portrait looks really good! The main thing I'd focus on is the shadows. Right now, it feels a bit inconsistent that the shadow under the neck is stronger than the shadows...”

“Hello there! Such a fun fat dragon! Even though there are a few things that could be improved in terms of the drawing itself, I'd like to focus on the painting. First of all, I'd adjust the v...”

“Hello there! You've done a great job here so far! I'd only make a couple of adjustments. I'd give the composition a bit more space at the top so the buildings in the background aren't cropped so...”

“Hey there! What a great painting! The colors and the overall mood are spot on! The gradient in the sky from the reference, which is actually fog, is an important part of the atmosphere. It creat...”

“Hey! One thing I'd recommend to help you is to focus on making the shapes of each element clear, so it can be easier to read. Aim for clear, readable silhouettes. Right now, the way you've paint...”

“Hey there! It looks a bit odd that the girl's face is fully illuminated when the main light source is coming from behind her. That's why the other two characters' lighting feels more believable. H...”

“Hey there! Great design so far! One thing I'd focus on is improving your line quality. Since every line currently has the same weight, it's a bit difficult to read the design and distinguish each ...”

“Hello there! I really like the character; he's very funny! There are a few inconsistencies with the clothing, mainly because you've drawn it as if the fabric were tight enough to follow and emph...”

“Hey! The illustration is really good already! I like the top POV and the composition in general :D I'd recommend creating a stronger separation between your light and shadow values, since the...”

“Hello there! I helped define the lighting a bit more here. :) Since the light is coming from below, try to think about the body as a three-dimensional form. This will make it easier to determine...”

“Hey there! You need to push the contrast in the shadows a bit more, since the character currently feels somewhat flat due to the lack of stronger shadow shapes. :) Assuming the light is coming f...”

“Hey! You already have a solid foundation! At this point, it's mostly a matter of adjusting the shadows a bit. Whenever you're unsure whether your lighting is working correctly, I'd recommend loo...”

“Hey there! The illustration already looks great! :D I think the main thing you could work on is adjusting the shadows to describe better the volume you're looking for. To do that, you need to ke...”

“Hey there! I'm not sure if you shared this a while ago, so if that's the case, sorry for the late feedback hehe. I really like the overall composition! The composition on the right page looks gr...”

“Hey there! Such a cool dragon design! I didn't expect to see a dragon with an anglerfish lure. One thing I'd recommend to improve the lighting is to spend more time observing real references. Un...”

“Hello there! This is a solid start! Before worrying too much about textures or smaller details like the stairs, I'd recommend making sure you have a strong drawing base. The two most important thin...”

“Hey there! I think there are two main issues here. The first is clarity. At first glance, it wasn't immediately clear what I was looking at, and it took me a little while to understand what you ...”

“Hey there! I don't have much to add here. I really like the sequence of the frames, and it definitely makes me curious about the story behind them. :) I only made a few small adjustments, such as ...”

“Hey! Great dragon! I only made a couple of small adjustments. I corrected the perspective of the wings, since they felt slightly misaligned. The right wing should sit a bit lower so it follows the...”

“Hello there! It looks great! :) Keep the direction of your light source in mind before you start shading. When the light direction isn't clearly established, it's very easy to place shadows ever...”

“Hey! This is a really nice drawing! Drawing directly with pen, without an initial pencil sketch, is a great challenge! :) I mainly focused on adjusting the facial features to make the character ...”

“Hey there! Nice work here! :) This is a great lighting exercise. If the light is coming from the upper front, then the cast shadow shouldn't fall toward the left—it should project farther back i...”

“Hey! This is a fun illustration! :D The main thing I'd work on here is the values and the overall contrast. Since all of the chickens are lit in a very similar way, it's a bit difficult to know...”

“Hello there! Shading isn't as complicated as it seems... well, maybe a little, but not that much haha. The most important thing is to establish the direction of your light. Without a clear light...”

“Hello there! Well done here! Overall, you've done a great job! Drawing without guidelines bit challenging at first, but you're doing well. :) Remember that you can ghost your lines before commi...”

“Hey there! I really like the dragon concept! Three heads... now you just need to draw a one-headed dragon with three bodies. Haha... terrible joke. I'm definitely not a dragon expert, but I made...”

“Hey! You've already received a great feedback, but I still wanted to share the version I made before you get the other feedback :p It's basically the same idea: separating your values more clear...”

“Hey! I'd say try not to despise what you make. I know that's easier said than done haha, but I think it's healthier to avoid that mindset. Instead, try to recognize what you don't like about it an...”

“Hey there! Well... I think there are two concepts you might be struggling with: value grouping and shadow mapping. At least, that's what it looks like to me. :) Overall, the shadows need to have...”

“Hey! Good work so far! :) I think the main thing to focus on is emphasizing the structure of the torso a bit more and making it feel more dynamic. If you look at most of their gesture drawings,...”

“Hey! Well done so far! However, the colors don't quite match the reference. If you take a closer look, the clouds aren't completely gray. They're mostly warm orange tones, with some subtle, d...”

“Hello there! I love the scene! The texture of the snake is a chef's kiss! :D I think the focal point is already very clear. My eye starts at the foreground torch and naturally travels toward th...”

“Hey there! I love the character design! The only thing I'd adjust is making sure the horns on the collar (if that's a collar?) are aligned with the character's perspective. If you trace lines...”

“Hey there! It's looking really good so far! Overall, I don't see any major issues with the background. You can keep it simple by using just the silhouettes of the trees with a bit of detail to s...”

“Hello there! The character looks a bit off because the connection between the head and the body isn't quite right, and the shoulder area isn't fully defined—especially the character's left shoulder...”

“Hey there! Good job here! The main issue is that you're not thinking in terms of three-dimensional forms, which makes the drawing feel a bit flat and awkward. Try thinking of the cat as a simpl...”

“Hey there! Good job so far! However, you're forgetting one of the fundamental concepts behind drawing ellipses: the minor axis. Remember that the minor axis is what helps us establish the corre...”

“Hey Sulay! You've been giving some really great feedback lately! Very helpful! Overall, I think the pose is working well. I only have a few small adjustments that I think would make it even stro...”

“Hey there! What a beautiful castle! Great work on this! The convergence errors are very subtle, so they're not immediately noticeable. A good way to spot them is by drawing guide lines over your...”

“Hey there! Good work so far! :) I think the key here is to focus on the structure of the underside of the nose. Try not to worry too much about the nostrils for now, and instead concentrate on d...”

“Hey, Gino! I took a shot at refining your figure. I'm definitely not an expert when it comes to hatching, but I wanted to show you one possible way of approaching it. :) Try to make your hatc...”

“Hey there! Such a lovely drawing so far! :) I only made a few small adjustments. To begin with, I felt the head was a little too large, so I reduced its size slightly. I also focused on impro...”

“Hey there! I think you could improve the structure of the nose a bit so it doesn't feel quite as flat. More importantly, try thinking about the overall structure of the face, especially the hair. ...”

“Hello again! One thing you could try is drawing a horizontal guide line across the base of the boxes and another through one of the upper corners of the front face. This will help you make sure all...”

“Hey there! The boxes are looking really good overall! I don't see any major issues. :) My only question is whether these boxes are meant to be drawn in two-point perspective or three-point persp...”

“Hello! It's looking really good so far! After comparing your drawing with the original reference, I think the main reason the face feels off from this angle is that the underlying head structure...”

“Hey there! Great work so far! Unfortunately, images and links can't be shared here, so I'm not entirely sure what rendering style you're aiming for. I'm assuming it's something more stylized, th...”

“Hey! Just a few small corrections here. If the light is coming from the left side and is bright enough to affect the character's upper torso, then it should also influence the side of the head, ...”

“Hey! Just a few small corrections here. The angle of the shoulders wasn't quite matching the character's perspective, as the left shoulder was sitting noticeably higher than the right. The head ...”

“Hello there! The main issue here is the pelvis. Because of its orientation, the legs feel completely disconnected from the body. Notice that the pelvis is pointing upward, while the legs (as indic...”

“Hey, Gino! Drawing larger body types can be tricky... but I gave the pose a bit of a correction! :) One thing you can work on is improving your line quality. I didn't do the best job demonstrati...”

“Hey there! I'd recommend focusing on studying the human figure using simple forms, or at the very least, starting your drawings with them. Doing so makes it much easier to build more complex forms ...”

“Hey there! From my POV, and from what is taught quite extensively at ArtWod, the solution is to start with a more simplified drawing using basic forms such as boxes and cylinders. Working with s...”

“Hello there! Looks cool so far! :D The main thing that needs attention is the convergence of your perspective lines. Some of them aren't properly converging toward the central vanishing point. ...”

“Hey there! Great work, and nice use of hatching to describe the volume of the face! I only made a few minor adjustments to the proportions by slightly elongating the face, since the model has a ...”

“Hey! It's looking really good! You have a couple of ways to adjust the contrast. One option is to use Levels (I'm not sure which program you're using, but most painting software includes somethi...”

“Hey there! What a piece, especially considering it was done entirely from imagination! :) One thing I would suggest is pushing the lighting contrast a bit more. Some areas should be receiving mo...”

“Hey there! Good work so far! :) Just something simple as pushing the shadow colors a bit further using stronger shadow tones will create a clearer contrast between your values and help establish a...”

“Hey! It's looking really good so far! The only thing that stands out to me is that the lighting feels a bit inconsistent. Right now, you've painted rim light on both sides of the character, whe...”

“Hey there! Overall, you did a great job! :) The main thing that feels a bit off is the proportions. The arm is a little too thin, and the shoulder pad could use a bit more thickness as well. Th...”

“Hey there! I don't have much to add. You could introduce additional vanishing points if you want to draw objects with a different orientation. Otherwise, there's really no need to add more vanis...”

“Hello there! The proportions feel a bit off at the moment. The character doesn't appear to have much shoulder structure, which makes the arm supporting the face feel disconnected from the rest of t...”

“Hello there! I don't have much to add; overall, the illustration looks great! There were only a couple of small adjustments I made. I felt that the woman's arm was slightly too wide, so I reduce...”

“I really like what you've done so far! One thing I would suggest is adding more information to the scene. Right now, it feels a bit too simple, so it isn't fully communicating the idea you've describ...”

“Hey! You've already received some great feedback! It never would have occurred to me to solve the orientation issue using three-point perspective, that's a really clever approach. :) I'd also li...”

“Hey! I initially adjusted the clouds assuming the horizon line was positioned near the top of the image because of the lines you drew. Later, I realized those were actually sun rays and not perspec...”

“Hey there! Good work here! I made a few adjustments to the lighting, as it didn't feel entirely consistent. Since the sun is placed behind Superman, the shadow side of his body should remain mo...”

“Hey there! I could have pushed the proportions further to make the portrait more closely match the reference, but I get the impression that you're intentionally aiming for a more stylized look. Bec...”

“Hey there! I only made a few adjustments to the characters' proportions, particularly the arms, as they felt a little too short in both poses. I also think that tweaking the leg position of the ch...”

“Hey there! What a great portrait, and a really lovely style! The only thing I would suggest is adding a bit more volume to the hair by introducing some shadows. Doing so helps define the organic...”

“Hey there! Overall, it's looking really good! I ended up changing a few things because I got a little carried away while drawing, haha. But the main things I wanted to address were giving the no...”

“Hello there! Good work! However, the main issue isn't really the proportions or anatomy; it's the perspective of the scene. Right now, there are two different perspectives at play. One belongs ...”

“Hey there! Overall, you're doing a good job so far, but part of the reason the drawing feels flat is that the underlying form isn't being fully considered, particularly in the leg. Its perspective ...”

“Hey there! It's looking really good so far! I'm not sure what reference you used for this portrait, but I do think it would benefit from some additional lighting. In my paintover, I added light ...”

“Hey! You've already received some great feedback, so I wanted to illustrate a bit of what others have been talking about. :) Try not to think so much about the contour of the figure and focus more...”

“Hello there! You're doing well with the cylinders so far! :) Just try to avoid using too many strokes when drawing them. Before committing to the line, practice ghosting the motion a few times. ...”

“Hello there! I really like the illustration! :) One thing I would recommend is experimenting with painting your shadows using more graphic shapes, while also introducing a bit of a transition be...”

“Hey there! Good work so far! I really like the idea, but the composition itself isn't fully working yet. I'm not entirely sure what type of game you have in mind. Is it something more like a sid...”

“Hey there! Great work! The only thing I would adjust here is the consistency of the lighting. The entire body is shaded except for the face, which makes it feel a little off. Because of that, I a...”

“Hello there! What a great dragon design! It looks so cool so far :D I would only make a few adjustments to communicate the idea of a silly dragon a bit more clearly. First of all, the expressi...”

“Hey there! What a lovely illustration! One thing that would definitely help make it more interesting is the lighting. Not only will it give the character better volume, but it will also strengthen...”

“Hello there! You already have a solid foundation, but you should make sure that all the parts of the cello follow the same perspective. In your example, I drew red guidelines to show the perspec...”

“Hey there! Overall, the portrait feels a bit off at the moment. The eyes are misaligned, the ear is too small, and the face as a whole feels slightly skewed. What I did was focus on correcting ...”

“Hello there! I really like the design! The main thing I would change here is the placement of the lower arms. Rather than having them overlap with the character's main arms, I think it would be ...”

“Hello there! Such a lovely illustration! The first thing I would address here is the scale of the characters. Both of them feel a bit too large when compared to the door frame. If you imagine th...”

“Hey there! Good work so far! Regarding the front-view portrait, the top of the ear shouldn't align perfectly with the eyebrows, since the outer curve of the brow sits slightly higher than the br...”

“Hey there! Good work so far! Really love how it looks so far! :D The first thing I noticed was the structure of the nose. It doesn't feel very solid at the moment, which makes it read a bit stra...”

“Hey! I'd like to add a few thoughts as well. :) The main thing I would change is the lighting of the scene as a whole. Right now, it feels a bit flat because the lighting isn't clearly defined, wh...”

“Hello there! I'm not entirely sure what you were trying to draw, hehe. That said, the main reason your drawing feels flat is that you're thinking in terms of flat shapes rather than the volume of ...”

“Hey there! You've already received some great feedback from Andrew. :) I'd still like to share a few thoughts of my own. I usually start by establishing the gesture of the pose, mainly to solve...”

“Hello there! I really like how this is coming along! The main issue I see is the lack of contrast between the character and the background, as they both share a very similar value range. If you l...”

“Hey! This is incredible! The design is fantastic, and the rendering so far is a chef's kiss. Overall, everything looks great! That said, I do feel that the materials are a bit too smooth at the...”

“Hey there! I absolutely love the brushwork you've done here; very impressive! You'll notice that the upper part of the eye sits roughly where the upper curve of the nose begins, as shown in the ...”

“Hey! Great work so far! It's good that you're starting to get familiar with gesture drawing; however, I'd recommend studying perspective and form manipulation. These are two very important funda...”

“Hey! Great work so far! I think it's a bit difficult to give feedback on everything you've mentioned, so for now I'll focus primarily on the value structure and lighting of your illustration. A...”

“Hello there! I really like the theme of the illustration, but the fact that the values aren't grouped is what makes everything feel a bit off. I'm assuming the light source is coming from above,...”

“Hey! What a lovely illustration so far! I really like your art style. :) When it comes to lighting, it's essential to keep the direction of the light in mind. You need to establish where the lig...”

“Hey there! What a level up! The only thing I would adjust here is the character's lighting. At the moment, it's not entirely clear whether the light is coming from above or from the side. What ...”

“Hey there! The issue isn't really that everything looks washed out or too soft—it's that the image feels flat because everything shares very similar values. There's very little sense of depth, and ...”

“Hey! Mark has already given you some great feedback. :) I'd just like to add a little more. When you're projecting the cast shadow of an object, you always need to keep the direction of the ligh...”

“Hey! You've done the exercise well, both boxes look good! :) The reason the box looks very narrow is that it's very close to the horizon line. This happens with all objects in perspective. The ...”

“Hey there! Good job so far! The character's proportions feel a bit off, particularly the legs. The upper portion of the right leg is too long, while the other leg feels too wide and lacks a clear ...”

“Hey there! Well, I'd definitely recommend focusing on improving the structure and proportions of the head. For example, the structure of the head on the right isn't quite working because you're n...”

“Hello there ! The way you drew the torso doesn't feel very believable. I say this because the middle section of the torso is much too narrow—it almost looks as if there isn't enough room for any or...”

“Hey there! Very nice practice! However, I don't think you're taking the horizon line of the scene into account. You have a very large tree on one side and, on the other, only silhouettes of smaller...”

“Hey there! Keep the lighting of the scene in mind. Since the moon is behind the creature, it will mainly lit the contours, helping the silhouette stand out against the dark background. Without clea...”

“Hey there! Nice work so far! :D I think the pose could use a bit more acting to make it feel more expressive. Try thinking about how the character would naturally interact with the necklace. O...”

“Hey there! I think this reads more as a lighting study than a composition study. I like the idea of using blue in the shadows, but in this case it doesn't quite follow the lighting logic of the sc...”

“Hey there! Great theme! :D The only thing that stood out to me is that the character feels a bit too large compared to the car. So the main adjustment I made was correcting the scale (which, of c...”

“Hey! You're doing well so far! :) Follow the vertical centerline of the side ellipse; it will help you locate the jawline, since the neck begins just behind the ear. Also, remember that the ear s...”

“Hey! Nice work here! :D I completely understand the struggle with drawing large ellipses; they can end up a bit wonky. Even now, I still have trouble drawing accurate large ellipses from time to...”

“Hey, Inkdiot! Pff... what an illustration! I absolutely love the dark atmosphere, and I'm always amazed by how people come up with such cool ideas like this! :D I'd only make a few adjustments t...”

“Hello, Marshrom! This reminds me of Zelda. :) The main thing I'd recommend is pushing the contrast between light and shadow much further. Let the lava, the main light source, contain the bright...”

“Hey there! Think about the character's lighting. It feels a bit inconsistent for the character to be fully illuminated when the main light source is coming from behind. Of course, you could justif...”

“Hello there! When painting lighting, the first thing you need to establish is the direction of the light (which you've already done). From there, think about which planes are directly facing the li...”

“Hello there! I really like the illustration so far! The main thing I'd work on is the lighting, since it feels a bit inconsistent. From what I can tell, the main light source is coming from abo...”

“Hey! Nice job here! :D Overall, I really like the art style! The simplified shapes are chef's kiss. I only made a few small adjustments. First, I separated the foreground, midground, and bac...”

“Hey! Well... the proportions are definitely the main issue in this illustration. The head is much too large, while the body is too small, which makes the painting feel a bit off, unless that was...”

“Hey! Nice job here! You already have a solid base imo :D However, I'd recommend continuing to work on your drawing skills as well. It's one of those fundamentals that you'll eventually need to ...”

“Hey! I'm assuming the idea is that this character is a giant? If that's the case, I'd first recommend lowering the horizon line. Placing it lower in the composition helps emphasize the height of...”

“Hey! Nice work so far! :) It's a solid start, but I'd recommend spending a bit more time analyzing the forms of your subject, in this case, the turtle. There's nothing wrong with tracing over...”

“Hey! Very cool! :D When you're drawing facial expressions, follow one of the tips we often hear in ArtWod: use emojis as references for facial expressions lol. I'm definitely not an expert o...”

“Hey there! It's always good to go back to the fundamentals from time to time! :D There's always something new to learn—or relearn—and improve. If you have the chance, I'd recommend taking the d...”

“Hey there! Nice work on these figure studies! :) It's clear that you already have a solid foundation in figure drawing. That said, I think what would help you the most right now is practicing mo...”

“Hey! Nice work here! :D One thing I'd suggest is making the lighting read more clearly. The rim light you've painted on Vi's forearm and hand suggests that the main light source is behind her...”

“Hello there! I think this might be a bit difficult to correct since you're working with oils, but I'd still like to point out one thing. There seem to be two different perspectives in the painti...”

“Hey! I think one of the main issues is that the lighting direction hasn't been clearly established. Because of that, it's difficult to know where the shadows should fall, which makes the lighting f...”

“Hey there! Just a few small observations. The eyes were a bit too close together. Notice how the inner corners of the eyes line up with the wings of the nose. Keeping that relationship helps the...”

“Hey! This is a pretty straightforward fix. You just need to lighten the background. If you look at the image in grayscale, you'll notice that the values throughout the scene are very similar. Th...”

“Hey there! The torso itself is a bit too wide as you've drawn it. Notice that the rib cage is actually much narrower and slightly more elongated. Also, the top of the rib cage doesn't reach all ...”

“Hey! I saw that you've already received some really good feedback! :D So I'll just add one thing about the armor. Remember that armor wraps around the body. Because of that, it should follow ...”

“Hey! Nice work here! :D Just one small correction. The pose feels a little unbalanced, which makes it seem like the figure could fall backward. Notice how I pushed the line of action a bit...”

“Hey there! Nice work! :D Just a few small things to correct in your portrait. The main areas I'd focus on are the structure and shape of the nose, as well as the size of the lips. The lower p...”

“Hey! It looks like you already have a solid foundation, but I think what you need now is to define your forms more clearly and focus on improving your proportions. In both mannequins, the arms are ...”

“Hey there! I saw that Rembert already gave you some feedback! :D What I did is actually pretty similar to what he suggested—I adjusted the head structure to improve the proportions. The ear w...”

“Hey there! The two different lighting setups feel a bit conflicting to me. On one hand, you have natural light illuminating the character's face, but on the other, you also have the light coming...”

“Hey there! Overall, I think the lighting could use a bit more contrast. One thing that's very characteristic of League of Legends splash art is the strong light-against-dark and dark-against-lig...”

“Hey! Great job! Rendering something like this takes a lot of time and patience... I don't usually have the patience to spend that long on a painting, haha. Anyway... I think the squirrel needs...”

“Hello there! I don't have much to say about it. I just correct the lighting a bit, the shadow shapes :) Keep it up!”

“Hey! Nice work here! :D The lighting feels a bit inconsistent. For example, why would there be bounce light on the inside of the character's torso? It almost looks as if the light reflecting ...”

“Hey there! Nice work here! :D The main thing I'd adjust is the lighting, since it doesn't feel completely consistent with the scene. On one hand, you have the light coming from the projector, b...”

“Hello there! Nice work here! :D I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the challenge! Whenever I take part in challenges, I usually focus more on what I'll be able to improve and learn during that time ra...”

“Hello there! If you're having trouble painting shadows in general, the first thing I'd recommend is avoiding shadows that are almost the same value as the lit skin. When your shadow values are too ...”

“Hey! It's a solid composition, but it feels a bit flat to me. One thing you could try to improve it, or at least keep in mind for your future sketches, is to play more with the terrain. Instead ...”

“Hey! It's been a long time since I last went to a coffee shop to sketch people. I should do that again... Anyway, this is just a suggestion, but when you're drawing people from life, I think it'...”

“Hey there! Nice work on these gesture drawings! :) That said, I'd recommend putting more emphasis on capturing the shape of the torso, because I personally think that's one of the most important...”

“Hey! Good work so far! I think there are some really interesting compositions here. :) I picked one of them to show how I might improve it. The first thing I did was play with the terrain by ...”

“Hello! This is my first time giving you feedback. :) I've really enjoyed the feedback you've been giving so far! Anyway, out of the four options, C is my favorite, followed closely by A, but I l...”

“Hey! Good work so far! :) One thing I'd recommend is keeping the background simple, just a ground plane and a sky. That way, you won't have to worry about painting a complex environment and can ...”

“Hey! What adorable rabbits! :D I corrected one of them, but I think these observations will be helpful for your future drawings as well. :D The rabbit felt a bit off, mainly because of the pe...”

“Hello there! Good work here! :D I think it's a solid foundation overall. One thing I'd recommend is defining the forms more clearly, since many of the edges throughout the environment are a bit ...”

“Hello there! Good work here! :D What I'd recommend is starting with a simple mannequin as the foundation for your drawing. It will help you achieve better proportions and establish the pose more...”

“Hey! I'll build on what Mochi already mentioned. They're absolutely right—when we're beginners, we often think that the key to making something look good is adding more detail, when in reality, the...”

“Hey! It's looking good! Nice work! :D I only made a small correction to the perspective and direction of the front leg. In my opinion, having a clear underlying construction would make the shadi...”

“Hello there! I made a few adjustments to the proportions. The back of the head was a little too large compared to the front, and the jaw was an easy fix using the lasso tool—I just moved it up slig...”

“Hey there! Such a cool illustration! :D The main thing I notice here is that the lighting isn't entirely consistent. On one hand, the character's face is lit from below, which suggests the light...”

“Hey there! The illustration looks great so far! :D I'd only make a few adjustments, starting with defining the cast shadow on the neck. Right now, it looks a bit odd because the neck muscles are...”

“Hey there! Great job drawing this from imagination! :D Just a few small observations. The trapezius muscles are sitting a bit too high, and they aren't quite following the movement of the sho...”

“Hello there! Rendering is the cherry on top of the cake, so I'd recommend focusing on lighting first. You don't need to create a complex lighting setup, either. You can keep the shading simple b...”

“Hey there! It's looking really good so far! :D Just a few small corrections. The eyes were a bit too close together because the nose was too narrow, and its structure wasn't clearly defined. T...”

“Hello there! What I'd recommend is learning to construct the head using the Loomis method first. This approach will help you develop a much better understanding of the head's structure, includin...”

“Hey there! This is already a solid foundation! :D The main thing I notice is that everything is lit almost equally, so there isn't much of a value hierarchy. I'd start by darkening the surround...”

“Hey! The idea is really cool! :D That said, in this case I'd push the pose a bit further to give it more of a martial artist vibe. Take a look at the poses of karate practitioners and pay att...”

“Hello there! I can see several strong points here: the idea of using the glowing lines to guide the viewer's eye works well, and the overall silhouette of the character reads clearly. The issue is ...”

“Hey! Good work here! However, the two main things I'd focus on are the perspective and the sense of volume. Regarding the perspective, if we're viewing the ogre from above, we shouldn't be able ...”

“Hello there! I really like the whole concept of the goats on the cliff... It's still a mystery to me how they manage to climb walls like that, haha. Anyway, just a couple of small observations. ...”

“Hey! Good work so far, you already have a solid foundation. :) And you actually pointed out the main issue yourself: the forms don't read very clearly because the edges aren't well defined yet. ...”

“Hey there! Great job here! I really like the design of this voodoo chest. :) I don't have too much to say. I would only make a few small adjustments. To start with, I'd lower the rope that'...”

“Hey there! Well, in this case, I don't think there's much reason to worry about how the back would look in this pose, since what we're really focusing on is the front view. Broadly speaking, though...”

“Hello there! There's absolutely nothing wrong with painting simple subjects. :) It actually made me realize that I’ve barely painted any fruit myself... haha. Anyway, I only made a few adjust...”

“Hey! Good work! :D There are two main things I'd point out about the full-body horse. One is the proportions (which is what you asked about), and the other is the perspective. Regarding the p...”

“Hello there! Good work so far! To start with, I wouldn’t make the snowflakes in the foreground that large. Personally, having them all be roughly the same size and cover a good portion of the fo...”

“Ey, qué onda! :D This looks awesome! I took a look through your work, and everything you make is incredible! To be honest, I'd love to be able to create dark fantasy illustrations like yours some...”

“Hey there! You already have a very solid understanding of values. They do a great job of making each part of the scene easy to read. However, I think the main issue is that you haven’t establish...”

“Hey! From what I can see, you already have a solid foundation in gesture drawing. If I were to recommend one thing, it would be to focus on building more clearly defined torso forms. The best wa...”

“Hey there! Amazing work! Your hatching technique is so good! I wish I could do that too, haha. Anyway, I made a few small corrections. I only made a slight adjustment to the beast’s pose, but...”

“Hello there! Good job here! :D I’d love to give you some advice on the inking, but it’s not something I’m very experienced with, so I wouldn’t know what meaningful feedback to give. Because of t...”

“Hey! I don’t have much to say regarding color, you already have a very solid foundation in your painting style. I like it! As for the shading, you’ll need to define the direction of the light so...”

“Hello! Just a few small notes :D I think adding more gesture to the legs would make them feel more natural in neutral poses. In other words, notice how the legs tend to have an elongated “S” cur...”

“Hello there! I like the way you used the reference; however, personally, I’d like your character to follow the same gesture as the reference pose, in other words, to emphasize the body tilt more an...”

“Hey there! I really loved the way you drew the face, what a great technique! :D However, the perspective of the head and the body doesn’t quite match. You drew the head from a more frontal angle...”

“Hey there! I really liked this drawing! :D The theme and the narrative are very interesting :D The main issue I see is with the proportions, and a little bit with the position of the torso. As ...”

“Hello there! I like the portraits and the facial features of each one! :D I made a small correction to the top portrait. I felt the eyes were a bit too close together, so I moved the right eye sli...”

“Hey! So far, good work, but there are a few adjustments I would make. First, I would change the value of the blue background and make it lighter, since the hair and the background fall within th...”

“Hey there! Good exercises! :D I only made a few small corrections, since the heads were looking a little flat. Especially in the proportion between the side plane of the face and the sphere (like...”

“Hey there! Just a small correction regarding the larger character. The head was sitting a bit too far away from the body—in other words, the neck was too long. When viewing a character from abov...”

“Hello there! Just a small correction regarding the side-view pose. It’s common to draw the body completely straight, but the human body doesn’t actually work that way. The torso has a natural tilt...”

“Hey! I’ll focus for now only on composition :) Later, I could make an example for values or lighting. But anyway, first of all, define your horizon line. It seems like the horizon is placed too ...”

“Hey there! Well... It’s clear you already have a solid foundation, and at this point it’s mostly a matter of practice so you can draw better ellipses, and also patience. I can tell you that even a...”

“Hey! Nice sketch! :D And well, this is actually a pretty simple fix. For one, place the horizon line lower in the image. That will let you draw more of the upper trunk of the tree and, of cou...”

“Hey! Nice work! Although the image is a bit too bright and the drawing isn’t fully visible, I still tried to adjust the face a little and push the expression a bit more (even though I don’t usua...”

“Hey there! This has been one of my favourite Rei sketches so far, and you did a great job adding color to it! One thing I would do to make Gobtonio stand out even more is give his shirt a differ...”

“Nice work! One simple thing you can do is add a background. Even though we’re looking at the tower from a low angle, that doesn’t mean we can’t still see some of the background, like mountains, par...”

“Hey there! Nice work so far! It’s admirable to see your consistency up to this point. Just one small observation regarding the airplane (and in general): try to make the forms converge more accu...”

“Hey! Remember that in two-point perspective, the parallel lines should converge more accurately toward the vanishing points. And if you’re using a third vanishing point, then the vertical lines sho...”

“Hey there! Nice form manipulation practice! :D The only thing I'd say is that focus on drawing forms with better volume. Even though you drew the contour lines, the forms look too flat because ...”

“Hello there! Nice work! You’ve already received some really good feedback, especially regarding proportions and how to draw both sides evenly. What I’d add here is that the perspective feels a ...”

“Hey there! Just a few small corrections :) In the first head, we shouldn’t be able to see the entire underside of the nose, only a little bit, since we’re viewing the head from a mid-level angle...”

“Hey there! Nice work on this sketch! I adjusted the perspective of the animals a bit, since they were looking a little strange and flat, especially the tiger. I don’t usually draw animals, bu...”

“Hey there! Great work here :D I just corrected the pose and perspective a little bit. You've already gotten some good feedback from others, so I don't have much to add :D I hope this help...”

“Hey there! Wanted to have fun and work on this one :D I adjusted the proportions of the face a bit; the upper part of the head was slightly too large, while the ears were a bit too small. I...”

“Hey there! I like the character a lot! Very interesting. Here are a few observations: The head is relatively large, which makes it feel disproportionate compared to the body. In the same way,...”

“Hey there! I’m glad you keep drawing horses! It makes me practice horses too haha. Just one small note. For more complex scenes, I’d recommend always establishing the horizon line so you can bu...”

“Hello there! Nice work here! What I would recommend when drawing gestures is focusing more on the movement and flow of "I", "C", and "S" lines rather than concentrating too much on the body’s fo...”

“Hey there! Nice work here! :D Just a few adjustments to the proportions, particularly the nose and lips, since both are a bit too small. As a general rule for achieving more realistic proport...”

“Ey, qué onda! I think the main issue here is that you haven't established a clear light direction. Because of that, everything feels a bit blurry and flat. First, decide on the direction of the l...”

“Ey, hola! :D You've done a good job so far! One thing that helps me is drawing the gesture of the forms first, so I can get a better sense of how those forms behave from a different angle. Ano...”

“Hey there! So cool sketch! :D Love the squirrel's expression The only thing I would do is move the head closer to the body to reduce the size or distance between the two parts a little. It would...”

“Hey there! Nice work here! The only things I would change are the upper and lower sections of the heart. At the top, it would look better if you showed how the knife is actually penetrating the...”

“Hello there! I love the illustration! It's looking great so far. Just two small corrections. First, make the shadows darker to create a stronger contrast between the characters and the backgrou...”

“Hello there! This submission was fun to work on. It's been a long time since I last drew muscles on top of a Loomis construction. I only corrected a few things, mainly around the upper torso and...”

“Hello there! Sorry about the messy lines. I'm still getting used to the sensitivity of the new tablet lol. The main issue isn't really the position of the legs, but their proportions. Broadly sp...”

“Hello there! Well, the main issue is that you're not considering the height of the forms in the back of the boxes, particularly in the second rounded box. Because of this, it ends up looking flat. ...”

“Hey there! Sorry about the somewhat messy lines in the draw-over; I'm still getting used to my tablet's sensitivity. I adjusted the proportions and perspective of the characters a bit. For th...”

“Hey there! Nice work! It's admirable to see such consistency in your drawings. Just a small correction regarding the proportions and a bit of the perspective. The arm was too long. If you ima...”

“Yo! Nice work here! Just a few small corrections regarding the proportions of the figures. The figure on the left had a neck that was too long. One technique you can use is the "rule of third...”

“Yo! Something fairly simple to correct. You need to draw the torso in a stronger 3/4 view, or at least emphasize the 3/4 perspective more, because right now the armor looks like it's facing dir...”

“Hey! Nicely done so far! However, the figures feel a bit off, especially the one on the right. In both poses, we should be able to see the underside of the ribcage because of the tilt and ben...”

“Hey, dude! Great work as always! Darksiders is a great game. Overall, everything is looking really solid! As far as the design goes, I don't have anything to add. In my opinion, all the elements...”

“Hey there! Such a cool concept! Everything is working really well already! The only thing I did was push the shadows a bit further to create a stronger distinction between the light and shadow ...”

“Hello there! I'm a fan of the sketches you've done so far! Impressive work! I only made a few adjustments to the pose. I'm not exactly an expert at drawing this kind of pose, especially with ver...”

“Hey there! Nice work, and good practice! I only made a few adjustments to the convergence of some of the lines and rounded out the lower buildings a bit more, since they previously felt somewhat...”

“Hey there! Something I would recommend is avoiding placing the horizon line right in the middle of the canvas. Doing so tends to make compositions feel a bit dull or static. It's usually much more ...”

“Hello there! I don't think the main issue is the rendering itself, but rather the value hierarchy and lighting. Of course, any illustration can always be refined further, and the rock formations c...”

“Hey! Nice work! The main issue I see here is the perspective and viewing angle. The eyes in your drawing are not properly aligned, whereas in the reference, they follow the same perspective. ...”

“Hello there! The proportions felt a bit off overall. The upper part of the head was too wide, the nose didn't feel volumetric enough, and the mouth appeared too small. Likewise, the ear was und...”

“Hey! The key to a good drawing is its structure. You'll notice that I lightly sketched the underlying structure of the head using simple forms such as boxes and cylinders. On top of that foundat...”

“Hey there! Nice work here. I'll say the same thing I've mentioned before: the issue isn't really that you can't draw boxes. The issue is that their lines aren't converging toward the vanishing p...”

“Hello there! Nice work so far! The first thing I'd recommend is avoiding painting on a completely white background. Working on a mid-tone or darker background will help you maintain much better ...”

“Hey! Similar to what I mentioned in another critique: Make sure your lines converge toward the vanishing points. In two-point perspective, the lines on the right side should converge toward the ri...”

“Hey! Well, if you're having trouble drawing boxes, the first thing I'd recommend is avoiding curved grids. They tend to make accurate convergence much harder to establish. Instead, you could draw ...”

“Hello there! Nice work! The main issue here is that the convergence lines of the stairs do not follow the intended vanishing point. Instead, they appear to be converging toward a different vanis...”

“Hey! Nice work so far! However, the pose is off. Notice that the tilt of the shoulders and the hips doesn't match the reference. This is something I would recommend identifying first whenever yo...”

“Hey there! Beautiful illustration! The main issue here is the value structure. The image feels flat because the value range is very similar throughout the entire scene, which means there's littl...”

“Hello there! I really like the design! Very creative. One thing that could help is lowering the values in areas such as the inside of the cape and the shadow beneath the neck, while slightly inc...”

“Hey there! The torso felt a bit strange, a bit too elongated, and the abdomen and hip area weren't following the same perspective as the chest. What I did was reduce the distance between the upp...”

“Hello there! I like that you decided to draw boxes in a different way instead of keeping them as simple, plain boxes. When painting objects, try to avoid shading them using the same hue as the l...”

“Hey there! I made a few adjustments to the pose. The chest felt a bit too narrow, while the character's left deltoid was much too wide. At the same time, the arms were slightly too short. Th...”

“Hey there! Sorry for the delay in getting back to you with feedback. Overall, the piece is looking good, but the lighting feels inconsistent. You currently have two light sources, one on each...”

“Hey Nika! The skin texture is throwing me off a bit, which I think is actually a good thing for you, because it means you've done a great job with the rendering. The only thing I did was push th...”

“Hey there! I remember this character; it was one of my favorites during the contest! I came across it again and wanted to give you a bit of feedback. The changes are fairly subtle, mainly focus...”

“Hello there! Sorry for the delay in getting back to you with feedback. I think the best way to give the character more volume is to create stronger contrast between the light and shadow areas. ...”

“Hey! This drawing is awesome! Antonio's demonstration is really cool. I only made a few corrections, mainly to the character's chest. It wasn't following the same perspective as the rest of the ...”

“Hello there! Well done here! I adjusted the values a bit to create stronger contrast between the light and shadow areas. Let's assume that the staff is the primary light source. With that in mi...”

“Hey! Nice work here! And don't worry if it takes you a while to finish this roadmap—or, in general, if it takes time to complete the exercises. There's no rush! As for organic objects... I un...”

“Hey there! Well, even though you're still experimenting, I wanted to make a few corrections to the figure at the bottom. The ribcage box felt a bit too small and needed to be slightly elongated...”

“Hello there! Nice work here! Keep the character's perspective and the volume of the forms in mind. The eyes weren't following the same perspective as the nose (particularly the lower plane of...”

“Hey there! I absolutely love your character! The Scottish-inspired outfit and the eagle (or creature) motif at the bottom look fantastic! Although I think it would look even cooler if that shap...”

“Hello! What a cool illustration! I really like the use of color, it's very dynamic. I only made a few minor corrections, nothing major, honestly. The teeth being so bright white looked a bit st...”

“Hello, hello! Beautiful illustration! The only thing I would do in this case is adjust the values a bit to create stronger contrast between the whale and the environment. For example, you coul...”

“Hello there! Interesting concept! The only thing is that the idea of the character being "futuristic" isn't coming across very clearly at the moment. You could add some mechanical elements to t...”

“Hey there! Glasgow... a city I hope to visit someday myself. :,) Nice drawing so far! I think you could keep pushing this piece further. At the very least, I would recommend refining your linew...”

“Hello there! Nice work here! I really like the idea behind your drawing. What I would suggest is adjusting the character's proportions. In particular, the arms. Both of them are larger than th...”

“Hey there! Well, I think the topics you're showing in these gesture drawings are quite different from what you're mentioning about rendering materials. Looking at your gestures, I can see that you...”

“Hey there! You already have a very solid foundation here! As for the painting process: A lot of it depends on the style you're aiming for and how refined you want the final character to be. Fr...”

“Hello there! I really like the bird drawings! I only made a few perspective adjustments to each one so they would fit better within the perspective you've already established. In particular, I ...”

“Hey, man! I don't have much to say here. I just wanted to sketch over your drawings to refine them a little more :p Nice work here!”

“Hey there! The design looks good overall! What I think would help improve the drawing is adding shadow shapes to create stronger contrast. Without shadows, there isn't much visual hierarchy, so...”

“Hey! Well... There are two main reasons why it looks flat. The first is the lack of structure. Remember that a good drawing foundation can save you hours of painting. It's much better to start wi...”

“Hey there! I'm not sure whether you used references for the pose or drew it from imagination, but I’d really recommend using references so you can better understand the position of the arm holding ...”

“Hello there! Sorry for the delay in getting back to you with feedback. Overall, the piece looks good, but I'm not entirely sure what the focal point is supposed to be. At first, I thought it was...”

“Hello, bud! Nice work here! I adjusted the proportions of the head a bit, although doing so changed the drawing style slightly... but that's okay, take whatever is useful and apply it in your ow...”

“Hey! As for proportions, I think looking at it this way might help you place the facial features more accurately. Try dividing the face into three equal sections: from the top of the head to the e...”

“Hello there! The pose works well overall, but there are a few things that make it feel a bit off. The neck isn't properly connected to the head. The neck itself follows a diagonal direction, but...”

“Hey there! Sorry for the late reply. I hope this can still be of some help. I really like the idea of viewing the character from a higher angle. What I would do is exaggerate the gesture of the...”

“Hey! I like the illustration so far! I mainly adjusted the lighting and color. To start with, I recommend avoiding painting on a completely white background. On one hand, pure white can be hars...”

“Hello there! Nice work here! I really like the scene It feels cozy. However, I think what's holding it back is the atmospheric hierarchy. Everything carries the same visual importance: the stairca...”

“Hello there! The proportions of the face felt a bit off. Because of the length of the back of the head, particularly the hair, and the way it connects to the neck, the head appears somewhat elo...”

“Hey! Nicely done here! There’s an important point to keep in mind when drawing the body in a 3/4 view: it needs to follow perspective. Otherwise, the forms will feel off or unconvincing. Drawin...”

“Hey! I did something similar this morning :D Just a few small corrections on some of the boxes. In particular, the boxes on the sides should be narrower so they feel like they're actually rota...”

“Hey there! Nice work on the shading! I adjusted the proportions a bit since the legs felt somewhat short. One thing you can keep in mind is that the legs are usually about the same length as th...”

“Hey there! The proportions felt a bit off. Notice that the head was too large compared to the rest of the body, while the torso felt quite small. Likewise, the neck was too wide, which made the...”

“Hey there! Here's a lil painting fixing the perspective, it was slightly off. So that's why the hair looked kind of off, even tho the volume was there. Hope this helps! :)”

“Hey there! Nice work here! Just a few small corrections. The character's eyes were a bit too close together, and the nose lacked volume due to the way the under-nose area was drawn. It ended up...”

“Hey! Nice work so far! I made a few corrections to your portrait since some of the proportions felt a bit off. The mouth was slightly crooked, so I centred it a bit more. The right eye was a ...”

“Hey there! Creating stronger contrast between light and shadow will help improve this illustration quite a bit. If the light source is coming from the front, then everything facing the viewer shou...”

“Hey, Tomas! Interesting creature! First of all, you need to keep the direction of the light in mind at all times. One of the most common mistakes when painting is adding light everywhere, which ...”

“Hey! I didn't know about that challenge (there are so many art challenges on social media these days), but it's awesome that you managed to complete 120 poses! The main issue with the three figu...”

“Hey there! Nice work here! I would say that the best way to draw the forms of the body is to simplify them into very basic shapes such as boxes and cylinders. By doing this, you can focus more ...”

“Nice work on these gesture drawings! If you're continuing to do 5-minute gestures, you could start trying to indicate some of the major muscle groups a bit more. This will help prevent the drawings...”

“Hey there! I only corrected the ellipses on the cylinders in the lower section, since their degree of tilt wasn't fully following the perspective of the cylinders. In other words, the minor axes w...”

“Hello! I absolutely love this illustration, and I really liked the feedback Unicorn gave you as well! The only thing I would suggest is pushing the shadows a bit further to create stronger contras...”

“Hello there! Nice work here! You already have a solid foundation. What I would suggest at this point is blending some of the color transitions a bit more to help give the face additional volume....”

“Hey! Nice work here! You already have a solid foundation to build on! The main thing I would do is create a stronger contrast by pushing the shadows further. Even a simple shadow pass (without ...”

“Hey! Nice work here! I made a few adjustments to the pose. Overall, the proportions were already working quite well, so I don't see any major issues there. What I mainly did was push the pose a...”

“Hello there! I really like the idea here! The main issue is that the perspective of the horse and the character doesn't match the perspective of the scene. Both of them appear to be following...”

“Hello there! Great work! I don't have much to add or correct. I only made a small adjustment to the perspective of the character in the lower drawing. I think the pose feels a bit more balanced t...”

“Hey there! Nice work so far. I can definitely see that the feedback Um9s gave you earlier helped improve the composition! Here are a few things that I hope will help push the environment even fu...”

“Hello there! Nice work here! So cool style! :D The only issue I see is that the lighting feels inconsistent because there are two separate light sources, one on each side of the image. This mak...”

“Hey! Nice work here! The perspective was a little off, mainly on the front cylinder. Notice that the front ellipse was wider than the back ellipse, which made it feel inconsistent with the box i...”

“Hello there! The main issue is that the leg isn't following the same direction or orientation as the rest of the body. As a result, it feels like the torso is pointing one way while the hips are po...”

“Hello there! Great work so far! The painting already has a solid foundation, but what you need to do now is push the highlights further to create a stronger contrast between the lights and shado...”

“Hey! I couldn't really judge whether this is "good enough" for a professional artist. There's always room for improvement! However, you've only been drawing for one year and you're already produci...”

“Hello there! I made some corrections and even changed the pose a bit. The perspective was feeling a little off, as the facial features weren't following the same perspective as the torso. The pr...”

“Hey there! Sorry for the late reply. At this point, the feedback might not be all that useful anymore... but anyway, here are a few thoughts. I like that the outfit feels justified by the environm...”

“Hey there! Sorry for the late reply. At this point, the feedback might not be all that useful anymore... but anyway, here are a few thoughts. I like that the outfit feels justified by the environm...”

“Hey! Qué chévere personaje, dude! :D The only thing I would consider doing is introducing a few more bluish tones throughout the design to better justify the glow effect. I looked up a few refe...”

“Hey! I made a few adjustments to the pose. The original pose didn't feel entirely convincing to me, so I opened up the arms a bit more. Keeping them so close together felt unnatural, especially ...”

“Hey! It's important to develop a solid understanding of form, perspective, and anatomy, since these are fundamental skills if your goal is to become a comic artist. I can't say whether Marcos ha...”

“Hey there! Nice work here! I only made a few adjustments to the lighting, since the character was feeling a bit flat. Based on the cast shadow around the neck area, I'm assuming you were aimi...”

“Wooh! Love these sketches! :D Wish I have the patient to hatch like you did it :p”

“This one is so cool! I love it :D I'd exagerate the proportions a bit. Like making the frog bigger and the flower-hat smaller or viceversa. The frog and the flower have almost the same size he...”

“Hey! Very well done! I only made a few perspective corrections to these two groups of shapes. The boxes that weren't rotated weren't fully converging toward the vanishing point. Instead, some...”

“Interesting drawings, and definitely kinda dark! I like all of them, but the character in the center is my favourite I made a few adjustments to the proportions. The head felt a bit too large comp...”

“Hey! It's a cool idea and an interesting concept, the combination of a human face with a catfish is pretty unique. That said, I'd highly recommend spending some time studying form and perspectiv...”

“Hey there! Here's an example. Remember that in shadow mapping you gotta block the shadows shapes, using one single value/hue. After that, you can either continue paitning in the shadow areas, mid...”

“Hey there! Here's an example. Remember that in shadow mapping you gotta block the shadows shapes, using one single value/hue. After that, you can either continue paitning in the shadow areas, m...”

“Hey there! Nice work on this piece! It's so beauty! :D I think the lighting is already heading in an interesting direction, but there are a few opportunities to push it further and make the imag...”

“Hello there! Nice work here! I think the lighting would work even better if the character were kept mostly in shadow, with the light only catching the upper body. This would help emphasize the s...”

“Hey dude! This has definitely been my favourite Mermay piece! The design is incredible, and the mood and lighting are absolutely chef’s kiss! Very inspiring work! The only thing I might conside...”

“Hello there! The proportions feel quite off at the moment. The nose is too long, while the ears are too small. The lips are also too small and sit a bit too far away from the nose. Because of th...”

“Hello there! Nice work on your mermaid! The anatomy felt a little off in a few areas. In particular, the way the ribcage is bending, the fact that the arm appears to be positioned behind the bod...”

“Hello there! Exaggerating proportions doesn’t really affect the shading itself. What would affect it is not understanding the volume of the body and, as a result, not shading according to the forms...”

“Hands... The nemesis of every artist haha. You’ve done a good job! One thing you could try is learning to see the hand through simplified forms using a "mitten" approach. This is a technique tha...”

“Hey! Nice work! Personally, the forearm muscles are something I still haven’t completely mastered either, and I often forget exactly how they connect to the upper arm. Morphos is a great book t...”

“Hello there! Nice work here! I only made a few lighting adjustments. I added a bit more light to certain areas of the clothing, the hair, and the character’s face. I also introduced some ambien...”

“Hey! What an imaginative creature! It looks incredible! Just a few small adjustments that I think could help it stand out even more. Making the background slightly lighter near the top would he...”

“Hello there! Great work so far! I really like the direction this is taking. Just a few points: Try to avoid using the same color for every material. At first glance, I didn’t even notice that t...”

“Hey! Fantastic! :D I've really enjoyed seeing your process up to this point, especially now that the illustration is almost finished. I only made a few adjustments, mainly to the glow on the swo...”

“Good work here! One thing I would suggest regarding the lighting is placing the main light source above the character. With that in mind, think about all the planes that are not directly facing the...”

“Hey! Nice work! :) I adjusted the lighting a bit, assuming the light source is coming from above. With that in mind, I darkened the side of the head, parts of the hair, the cheek area, and the ey...”

“Hey there! Nice work here! Personally, I would choose a different lighting setup. I think the scene could work really well with a light source coming from above, allowing the merman to read mostl...”

“Hello there! That’s a tricky pose... Personally, I find poses like this a bit challenging to draw as well. Anyway, I tried to adjust the proportions, since they felt a little off. The torso seeme...”

“Hello there! One thing I would recommend is avoiding flat shapes and focusing more on suggesting volume. This applies particularly to the way you drew the hair and the beard. Notice how I approac...”

“Hey! I would play around with the composition a bit more to make it feel more dynamic. First of all, establish your horizon line. Doing so will help you determine whether we should see the tops or...”

“Hello there! Great illustration so far! I made a few adjustments, particularly to the values, because the value range throughout the image is very similar. As a result, there isn’t much distinct...”

“Hey! Same feedback as the previous one. Draw in "X-Ray" if you struggle figuring out how the limbs on the other side. Hope this helps!”

“Hey! I think this can be solved fairly easily; you need to learn to see forms in "X-ray mode." In other words, try to understand how the parts of the form that are facing away from the viewer woul...”

“Hey there! I don’t think they look like bears at all. In fact, before I even read your comment, I immediately recognized these heads as belonging to a feline. The only thing I did was make a few p...”

“What a great style and simplification of detail! The proportions are looking good overall, but the neck itself feels a bit too wide. From this angle, the neck typically connects slightly farther b...”

“Hello there! You’re right about the values; they’re too bright overall. For the fire to really stand out, you need to darken a large portion of the scene, including some of the interior areas o...”

“Hey! You’re doing a really great job with this piece! One thing I would suggest is avoiding shadows that are too dark. Even underwater, there is usually some amount of bounced light, unless you...”

“Hey there! It looks great! I completely understand the fear of working with ink. I don’t use the technique very often myself because of a lack of confidence haha, but hopefully I’ll start using i...”

“Hey there! I don’t see much of an issue with the mouth or the nose. The nose is a bit long, but honestly, that’s not a major problem. The proportions are what feel off. The eyes are too close to...”

“Hello there! This is a bit tricky to explain, but in general, there are two important things to keep in mind when shading organic forms. The first is the form itself. You already have a good under...”

“Hey there! The proportions of the mermaid aren’t quite working yet. The head doesn’t feel properly connected to the neck. In fact, you can see that the jaw is significantly wider than the neck i...”

“Good work here! The main issue I’m noticing with some of the vehicles is the perspective. In some cases, certain parts aren’t fully aligned or converging correctly toward the vanishing points. I...”

“Hello there! Good work here The head feels a bit strange because it’s reading as both a profile view and a 3/4 view at the same time. Part of the reason is that you didn’t draw the eye or eye s...”

“Hey! Good work. One thing I would highly recommend is studying perspective a bit more so you can draw hands and fingers more accurately. The reason the fingers feel a bit strange or flat is tha...”

“Hello there! Good work! I really like the character design so far I wanted to help a bit with the proportions since Vincent already gave you really solid feedback regarding the lighting. First ...”

“Hey! Always keep the light's direction in mind when shading, and try to make the shadows slightly darker to create a stronger contrast between light and shadow. On top of that, think about the sim...”

“Hello there! Good work so far! I really like the technique you’re using. One thing I’ve noticed is that some artists reinforce their shadows using soft value passes underneath the hatching, wh...”

“Hey! Good job! In the end, it turned out really well too! I honestly wish I could’ve given you feedback earlier so you would’ve had more time to apply it to the final piece. Hopefully, the prev...”

“Hey there! Nice job here. The only thing I'd do is to make the colours a bit more saturated. I was looking for the painting of the artist you mentioned (I loved what she does btw) and I noticed...”

“Ey! Perdona la gran demora. Hemos estado trabajando para darles feedback a entradas antiguas como la tuya. El rostro en general se ve bien, pero algunas proporciones se ven apagadas. Siento ...”

“Hey there! I think you could push the value contrast a bit more. For example, even though the lower part of the scene is underwater and naturally darker, you still have control over the lighting...”

“The issue I see here is that the 2-point perspective boxes aren’t following the same logic as the 1-point perspective boxes. In the 1-point perspective examples, the boxes go from looking “narrower” ...”

“Hello there! Good work here The ellipses overall feel a bit off because you’re not fully drawing the “roundness” of them. Some of the ellipses end up looking slightly square instead of properly...”

“Hey! Just a few small corrections. I’d recommend pushing the contrast between light and shadow a bit more. You can do this pretty easily using a Levels adjustment layer and slightly deepening the...”

“Hey! I wanted to adjust the pose a bit overall, since some parts felt slightly off, especially around the upper torso and the arms. The arms suggest that one is positioned forward while the othe...”

“Hey! Good work here! The main issue I see is that there isn’t enough shadow contrast yet, which makes the image feel a bit flat. What I did was paint darker shadows, since that helps define the...”

“Hey! Good work here. The main thing I would do is increase the shadow contrast a bit more. Right now, the face feels somewhat flat because there aren’t enough shadows defining the facial featur...”

“Hey! What a beautiful illustration! Usually, this kind of issue is solved by pushing the lighting contrast a bit more. Try to always create a “dark against light” or “light against dark” relati...”

“Hey! I can see that you’re struggling a bit with head construction and proportions. I’d recommend studying the Loomis head method. It’s a really good tool for learning how to simplify the struc...”

“Hey! Good work If you’re going to study Michael Hampton, I’d recommend focusing mainly on how he simplifies muscles into simple forms. That approach helps a lot when it comes to drawing muscles...”

“Hey! To draw foreshortening properly, you need a stronger understanding of perspective first. Because in the end, foreshortening is really just perspective drawing. Notice how the issue becomes m...”

“Hello there! I don’t think the vehicle is actually wrong. However, because of the perspective and viewing angle, it can feel a little strange. This happens because the vehicle is positioned fa...”

“Hello there! Well done so far! The main issue here is the structure of the head. The proportions themselves aren’t completely wrong, but the overall structure feels a bit off. Notice the way I...”

“Hey Alessio! The main issue I see here is that the characters aren’t really following the same perspective as the scene. For example, look at the upper part of the larger character. The ribcage...”

“Hey there! This looks so cool so far! :D Well, regarding the textures, I’d focus mainly on the face since that’s the primary focal point. Because of that, it makes sense to place the highest l...”

“Hey! One thing I’d recommend here is having better control over hard and soft edges, and the silhouette in general. Right now, almost everything has the same level of focus. To make the piece fee...”

“Hey! This is looking really good so far! The main thing I think you need is to define certain areas a bit more, especially the hair. As you know, it’s not necessary to paint every individual st...”

“Hey there! Overall, you did a really good job, and I don’t think you have trouble understanding how 5-point perspective works. What I think makes the cubes feel a little less dynamic is that the...”

“Hello there! Good work so far! I really like the idea of entering the dragon Here are a few ideas that might help improve the composition. Right now, everything feels a bit too large, which re...”

“Hey! Good work so far I’m not really an expert when it comes to poster design or illustration work related to this kind of theme, but I think the piece could work even better if you pushed the c...”

“Hello there! Now, regarding the colors, I think you could add more vibrancy to avoid the image feeling muddy. Right now, the shadows feel a bit dull because they lean too much into brown tones. To...”

“Hey! Good work! It’s definitely looking better now Just a few small adjustments, mainly around the face. Because of the angle, we should be seeing a bit more of the underside of the head. Oth...”

“Hey! Good work so far! I really like how this is looking overall. That said, the perspective and proportions feel a bit off in some areas. The head doesn’t fully match the same perspective as ...”

“Hey there! Good work so far! One thing I’d recommend is that if you struggle with finding the organic forms of animals, try building the body using more boxy or squared shapes first. Drawing wi...”

“Hey! The pose overall isn’t bad at all. The only things that feel a little off to me are that the character seems slightly tilted or unbalanced (though maybe that’s just my perception haha), and...”

“Hey! Yeah, the neck was feeling a bit too thin. Also, the angle of the head doesn’t fully match the perspective you’re suggesting. In theory, we probably shouldn’t be seeing that much of the ey...”

“Hey Oscar! I love your designs, dude. You're nailing it! I saw that um9s already gave you some really solid feedback! So the only thing I’d add here is that if you’re working with a light source l...”

“Hey! Just a few corrections. The main one would be the shield. Right now, it isn’t following the same orientation or perspective logic as the body. In theory, the left arm is the one holding t...”

“Hey there! For the “curiosity” scene, I would probably change the pose a bit. With the way it’s currently posed, the character feels more surprised than curious. So I sketched out these two al...”

“Hello there! Good work so far I really like the direction you’re taking with the warrior mermaid concept, but I would probably change the color palettes for Grace and Phantom. For Grace, the wa...”

“Hey! This looks incredible! I really like the creepy take on The Little Mermaid The main thing I noticed was the structure of the character, especially around the lower section of the torso. It...”

“Hey! Good work so far! It keeps improving with every revision. The main thing I would adjust here is the proportions of the characters. Darth’s head felt a bit too large, especially when com...”

“Hey! This looks really promising! :D The silhouette is interesting. One thing I’d suggest is: don’t get too attached to a single idea. You already have a strong base silhouette, so now it’s tim...”

“Hey! The perspective felt a bit off. The head was following one perspective (something closer to a frontal view), while the body was following a different one. If we’re looking at the body from a...”

“Hey! Good work so far, and you already have a solid base! :D If you want a more dramatic lighting setup, I’d recommend pushing the contrast between light and shadow much further. Right now, the...”

“Hey! This looks awesome! Maybe this is a sign that I should watch The Lord of the Rings haha. Just a few small adjustments, though. Some areas of the face are a bit too bright, which makes th...”