@garsna

“Howdy! This is a really strong piece! Overall I love the composition and environment. What I would suggest is playing a little with the lighting. The title "Secret Place" implies a bit of mystery s...”

“Howdy! The most glaring thing I am noticing with your image is that a lot of the lines are the same thickness. I am struggling a little to figure out what is form vs what is supposed to be shadow. ...”

“Howdy! I love the detail you got in the hair! And the solid black shirt makes for a bold, silhouetted style. I wanted to help you address the anatomy/proportions some. When I was looking over th...”

“Howdy! I think over all your colors are very successful! This is a great piece. I did notice in some parts there isn't much contrast between the character and the background, causing the colors ...”

“Howdy! I am loving the gown design! I would suggest relaxing the overall pose a bit by lowering the shoulders and not pointing the chin out so much. Keep in mind that when someone is turning their he...”

“(whuff, okay.)”

“(I apologize, my first draw over didn't post correctly.)”

“Hello! Overall this is a great start! I have provided a draw-over that I think could help. Concerning the chest and shoulders I noticed that the chest was set to high, not leaving much room for th...”

“Hello! When I was looking at this I noticed you have a lot of competing elements that are all in the same layer in space. My eyes were desperate for a little variety in terms of depth and size. W...”

“Hello! The issue I am seeing is that your colors and rendering of all the colors are blended together. A lot of good details about your character are getting lost, in the face specifically. It almost...”