Hello! When I was looking at this I noticed you have a lot of competing elements that are all in the same layer in space. My eyes were desperate for a little variety in terms of depth and size. What I did in my draw over was adjust the pose slightly to turn the character more towards the camera and I put her hands along a different axis with one hand out stretched towards the viewer and the other further away. This makes for a more dynamic and interesting pose. Secondly, I wanted to see more of the magic moth motif you have happening so to emphasize it a bit more you can place moths closer to the camera. This really helps create a sense of big/medium/small. It also helps guide the viewer's eyes a little (in my example from bottom right to top left). Not pictured is a coloring example - moving from light in the bottom right to dark in the upper left (where the smaller moths can really pop!) could also help create a more dynamic and interesting piece. I hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback