Hello! Overall this is a great start! I have provided a draw-over that I think could help. Concerning the chest and shoulders I noticed that the chest was set to high, not leaving much room for the collar bones. It also didn't appear to be aligned with the shoulders, making one side look much higher than it should be. I blocked it out so you could clearly see what I am talking about. I also noticed the pose was a bit off balanced, which could make it difficult to finish building out the body. Make sure when thinking about a character's pose you consider how the weight is being distributed - in this case the weight is mostly on the left leg/hip. I moved the right leg to a position that could better help the character feel a bit more balanced. I hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback