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“Hi! I love this piece honestly, I didnt change much, I think it just needed stronger contrast with the shadows, dont be afraid to make them too dark! I dont even feel like I made them dark enough here...”

“Hiya! Maybe something like this for the foreshortening? Definitely push the drawing MUCH more than you currently are. Nice concept though, I love it!”

“Hiya! I dont have too much to say, its a really cool sketch! I just feel like the shapes could be a lot stronger and more obvious. They shapes are a smidgen too muddy, and it makes some of the shapes ...”

“Hello! I think the big issue here isnt your drawing abilities, its more your concepting. ALWAYS try your best to not hide hands, even if theyre not the best hands, they add a TON of expression. Your i...”

“The hand is honestly great, the main issue im seeing is the perspective and the gesture. The I changed the angle of the head so it can 1. Flow along with the gesture you implied with the chest 2. Foll...”

“Hiya! I think the main issue im seeing is lack of decision making. Theres a lot of mess. Some places have strong decisions, some places dont, it feels very rushed. What Id say is practice just MAKING ...”

“Hello! The character placement is fine, I think the main issue is the decision on the 1 point perspective, I think this piece could be a lot stronger with a different layout, but if you wanted to keep...”

“Hello! There a few things I would change to make it feel more eastern. One small thing is that Eastern styles are actually use a lot of realism in their drawings, for example, the length between eyes ...”

“The style in the top reference has a lot of strong hard shapes that are gradually darkened in certain parts. The original had too many smaller bits of hair and strands of shadow, when they should be v...”