Hello! The character placement is fine, I think the main issue is the decision on the 1 point perspective, I think this piece could be a lot stronger with a different layout, but if you wanted to keep it that way, than focus on studying how your favorite art pieces keep the eyes directed torwards important parts of the piece. Like, eye directions, sharp points, literal pointers like the demons tail I noticed. Look back at your drawing and see where your eyes lead too, and draw accordingly. Give the viewer a place to go back to, then they can explore with the eye, then lead them back to your main idea. My comp here isnt perfect, but I hope its helpful, and its stuff that I keep in mind when im working on my pieces. | Artwod Feedback