Hello! There a few things I would change to make it feel more eastern. One small thing is that Eastern styles are actually use a lot of realism in their drawings, for example, the length between eyes are typically farther apart than in western cartoony styles. Look at Steven Universe vs Kill la Kill or something. Another small thing is just how the hair bunches together and where the decided to place certain details like the ears. Eastern styles tend to put the ears on top of the head rathar than the sides like people ears. Theres also a bit of stronger foreshortening on the arm going towards the screen, thats just for added effect. I would highly suggest if your wanting your style to feel more like manga/eastern. Do STUDIES!! Study your favorite anime/manga and take close attention to how far apart the eyes are, or how certain details are draw, ect. Im still not quite there personally, but ive been studying anime/manga myself, so I hope this helps! Id highly reccomend looking at Studio Trigger artists, I think thats closest to what your looking for in your art! | Artwod Feedback