Hi! I love this piece honestly, I didnt change much, I think it just needed stronger contrast with the shadows, dont be afraid to make them too dark! I dont even feel like I made them dark enough here, mostly because I wanted to stick with what you were doing, but they def needed to be darker. I also added redlines for the face, otherwise, great piece!

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Anonymous · 2026-07-12T11:40:00.849Z

A piece I couldn’t finish because I got stuck on 1. facial anatomy and 2. shading. I want a soft bright pastel feel but I’m confused about the lighting. I tried adding shadows to the left side but it made the faces too dark. I also think their expressions are off, especially the mouths. Any help appreciated!

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