@pifalo

“Well, I know you said you need help with lighting, but you actually need help in drawing first. I did a sketch to show you what I mean, and a lighting guide for the face. I hope this helps :)”

“The biggest issue is the proportions and the lack of gesture in the pose. I did a quick sketch to show you what I mean and how to have more realistic anatomy. I hope this helps :)”

“Your pose is very stiff because everything is very straight. You want to add some gesture to the pose by using anatomy and rhythm in the limbs and torso. I hope this helps :)”

“It's always better to create a mannequin first to make sure your proportions and anatomy are working correctly. Then it is easier to add details like clothing. I hope this helps :)”

“The pose is nice, you just lack some structure. By adding some 3D shapes it will help you create a figure that is more dimensional. I hope this helps :)”

“One of the things you can do to improve is to build a mannequin of the figure in the pose so that you can work out proportion and anatomy issues before going into details. I hope this helps :)”

“I think what you have here is pretty good. Just a few small adjustments is all you need. I hope the sketch helps :)”

“The head could be a little bigger and the arm anatomy needs work, but other than that nice job on the anatomy and pose :)”

“I like this idea and the way you rendered the boots. There is a little problem with the proportions. For a body this size, the head would be a little bigger. Also, the legs don't look like they are co”

“Try thinking of hair as ribbons with a few single hairs thrown in. Also, the left eye is a little small and too far from the nose. I hope this helps :)”

“There are some proportion issues here and some areas that feel flat because you didn't wrap the clothing around the forms. I did a quick sketch to show you what I mean, I hope it helps :)”

“Actually your proportions are not that far off. I did a quick sketch to show you the anatomy and the face, I hope it helps :)”

“I know this is just a sketch, but creating some perspective will help sell this dudes giant size and make sure the perspective is right. Cool design :)”

“I like the pose, it has nice gesture. The issue is proportion and 3D shapes. If you think about the neck as a tube attaching to the torso it will give it a more 3D look. That tube will also connect to”

“With a pose as complicated as this, I always begin with a mannequin to work out my perspective and proportion. Once this is working, you can always add details on top. I hope my sketch helps :)”

“Build the structure of your figure out of 3D shapes first, then add your details. This will help you to create poses that look correct. I hope this helps :)”

“You are right, the perspective is off. One of the things that help us show perspective is the overlapping of shapes. In the sketch you'll notice I overlapped the lower arm over the upper arm and fores”

“This image is very dark so it's kind of hard to see the details, but I did a quick and dirty sketch to show you how I would shade the hair and face. The biggest help is to pick a light source so that ”

“I worked out the poses using mannequins to find the proportions. It's what I always suggest because it helps you work out all your issues before you start getting too detailed. I hope this helps :)”

“This is cool and has a nice retro feel. The thing I notice is the face, the nose is long which is pushing the mouth down pretty far, and the eyes are a little far apart. I moved everything so that you”

“I think if you work out your poses with 3D shapes first, it will help make your poses better. I did a quick sketch to show how you can do that, I hope it helps :)”

“If you start with building the figure first out of shapes, it will help with the proportions. Also, if you pick a light direction, it will help you figure out the shadows on the clothes. I did a quick”

“Try to keep from making the figures straight up and down and the limbs straight. This causes the pose to be stiff and uninteresting. Find ways to add bends and twists to the figure when you want somet”

“The issue with your drawing is the lack of a pelvis and it's out of proportion. Also, I can tell you used the symmetrical tool in photoshop which makes the drawing stiff and less interesting. I hope t”