The issue with your drawing is the lack of a pelvis and it's out of proportion. Also, I can tell you used the symmetrical tool in photoshop which makes the drawing stiff and less interesting. I hope the sketch helps :)
Thank you for your help
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"Male Character Front View Study"
Notes de l’artiste :
النص المقترح (بالإنجليزية): "I am looking for feedback on two specific levels: 1. Overall Impact & Readability: Does the character's silhouette and general anatomy successfully convey strength/motion? Is the pose clear and expressive enough to communicate my intended concept at first glance?** 2. Proportional Harmony: Specifically, do the upper body parts balance well with the lower body? For example, are the legs too long or short compared to the torso? Are the shoulders wide enough relative to the hips?** Please focus on these structural relationships rather than minor muscle details."