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“This is a really cool design! I think there are few reasons your character doesn't feel settled into the scene. The first is the lack of a concrete light source. I can't actually tell where it is. ...”

“Your art style is gorgeous! I love it! Artwod censors are sensitive when I talk about the body so I put the critique into the image. Sorry about that! I hope you can still read it.”

“Artwod has a strict filter so I had find a way to work around it like changing the eye colour. Sorry about that! I hope it's readable.”

“That's really cool you're trying to learn digital art! It took me weeks to even get comfortable with it. I think you're very smart to tackle colour theory. Tutorials on the subject can be confusing,...”

“The face and expression are really nice! I think the reason is feels wrong is because of your perspective. Even if you aren't drawing a background you still have to keep perspective in mind! Becaus...”

“I really like the pose! It has a lot of character. So I think the biggest thing that is making your piece feel lacking is your values. Remember that value changes indicate plane changes! So you have...”

“Love the sense of scale in this piece! I think from here there are two things you could do. The first is begin your line art process and eventually colour. The second is go straight into colour an...”

“This is a really cool piece! Lighting can be difficult but there are a few major things you should keep in mind while painting it. First is how many sources of light are there? (The lantern? Is the ...”

“I love that you're practicing form! I personally think perspective and form is the most valuable thing you can learn. So the reason it might look a little unstable is because your lines aren't drawn ...”

“this is ai”

“The dragon looks amazing! I think what's making the colour look a bit off is your values. Since you have lots of strong sources of light like the green fire and glow from the rider, I think it would...”

“What cute ideas! I think there are multiple reasons it looks a little uninteresting. The first is that your focal points are at the same size and at the same level on the page. The second is that y...”

“A very cute character design! Perspective can be daunting at first but I will try to help. I see that you did draw in a horizon line and vanishing point which is good! But since you want to see the...”

“I really like the colours you chose! The green and pink really go well together! Hair is very difficult to render so I don't blame you for struggling. You want to make sure your foundations are there...”

“You rendering is very good! I'm not confident in my painting skills, but I think the biggest thing that can improve your art would be to work on anatomy and proportions. I can tell that you're not ver...”

“I think your anatomy is pretty good! Though i think practicing hands might help you. I think the biggest thing that could be fixed is your line weight. The really thick lines makes it look really me...”

“I love that you're challenging yourself to do full illustrations! Colour, light, and shadow all sort of go hand in hand. Hue, saturation, and value are all things you get a feel for from doing studi...”

“Ah, I totally get it! I was the exact same way. It does look like you have a pretty good understanding of form though! I can sense that you're wanting someone to tell you to draw and it'll be as easy ...”

“It's a really cute design! As for a critique, it seems like you have a good idea of things you need to work on based on your description. Anatomically, her left wrist is a bit broken to fit into the...”

“Artwod censored this lol”

“I love that you're not afraid to try difficult poses! I also love that you seem to draw a lot! Unfortunately I'm not sure I can give you any specific tips for anatomy. That's just something that you ...”

“What a cool design! I think the thing that stands out to me is the perspective. Make sure you know where the horizon line is! The planes of the subject will converge toward a vanishing point and the...”

“I just realised something I didn't explain well is that even different parts of the body will usually have different vanishing points which is why it is much more important to know where your horizon ...”

“It's really cool that you're challenging yourself! I think you did really good on the expressions and faces. If you want two characters to look like they exist in the same space you need to make sur...”

“paintover that was cropped out”

“What a cool concept! I also really like the colours and blue rim light. I want to say that I am not a character designer, but I'll try to help. I'm not sure if the ideas all come across, however. Lik...”

“I really like your hatching! It looks really good and the character is very nice. I thought the pose was a little awkward and didn't quite look like he was on the chair. I think it's because the per...”

“Glad you found something useful from it! Keep up the good work!”

“I think the readability is pretty good! As for line weight, I think there are some places that can be improved. I think that there a little too many thin, small lines in a lot of places that come of...”

“the mags and pockets look pretty good! I think the lack of 3 dimensionality comes from the figure himself. Particularly with the lack of a side plane on the torso. Because his body is slightly turned,...”

“Your drawing skill is really good! The anatomy on the arm is really nice as well. I do think your values do kind of blend together around the legs and with the background so I changed up the contras...”

“This is really well done! It took me a bit to figure out what might help. I've also never drawn a camel before so sorry about that. Your perspective is pretty good and things line up well. I do thin...”

“I forgot to mention! This is probably something you already know, but an easy way to get cool shapes is to start with a solid colour/shape and then carve pieces out of it with your eraser. So instead ...”

“The face looks really good! As for how to get it closer to clash royale, I think you need to watch your values and edges. If you actually look at the art in clash royale, the artist uses clearly defi...”

“The fact you were able to apply that so well and instantly is actually insane! Yeah, that's exactly what I meant! You can literally break anything down into basic groups of geometric shapes and use it...”

“Your foreshortening is so good! And I love how you rendered that hand. It looks great! I think maybe the values could have a bit higher constrast and the head is a bit small but it's a really good pie...”

“This is actually rendered so well! I think you're better at hatching than I am, but thought that some additional shading on the face would look more dramatic and I also thickened your line weight in s...”

“I think you really nailed the proportions of all your characters in relation to one another! I'm not sure what controlled edging is, but I assume you're talking about your lines? I'll try to help to t...”

“I meant everything can have their own vanishing points as long as they line up on the same horizon line*** Sorry typo in last message.”

“It's awesome that you want to learn to draw! It's a bit hard to make suggestions for beginner artists as they're just getting started and there's lots to go through, but I'll try to give some pointers...”

“A neat trick you can try is to draw the hands first in the place that you want them, then the object if they're holding one (This especially helps if they're hold it with both hands) And THEN you draw...”

“I'm really impressed with your drawing skill! Your hands, face, and feet look really good and even tackling a fat character can be difficult but I think you nailed it. I am by no means a character de...”

“That is a super cool design! I love the sword. I also like that you're trying to add 3 dimensionality with the tail, that was a really good idea that could've been applied throughout the image to push...”

“I really like the ideas you have here! I think pushing some elements a bit more would make it even more engaging. Like stretching the wings more as you can see in my drawover. Aside from that, I thin...”

“Your proportions for the head are actually pretty perfect! Your values are also really strong too. I think an area that could be improved would be the body's proportions. I red lined your drawing to ...”

“Your character is cute it made me want to do fanart of them instead of critique, but I'll try! I think the biggest improvement that could be made to your art is your line quality. Your proportions an...”

“This is a very competant piece! I'm not familiar with actors and actresses so I'm not sure who it is so while I was doing my drawover i made them look completely different. Sorry in advance. I am not...”

“It can be hard figuring out what to do when you reach a certain level of completion, but hopefully I can help! Usually the reason that people become fatigued during a drawing is because they're worki...”

“For someone who doesn't do full illustrations this is a really strong piece! I think knowing when to move on from a painting is also good instinct. I think what would make your piece even stronger i...”

“Wow your art is crazy! I wasn't sure it was worth critiquing bc anything I say will be minor but I'll try to help get that last 10% you mentioned. I do agree with you that the values don't lead the e...”

“I think you did a really good job! I think you nailed his expression. I think there are two big things that you could change that would instantly make it have more impact though! 1)The aspect ratio! ...”

“It's really cool that you're doing full scenes from imagination! That is something I still struggle with but I hope I can help. I think the best way you could enhance your art would be if you started...”

“What a cool piece! The character is really cool! Something that might help you is to think more about how your values are focusing the viewers eye. -The character is the focal point and you've done a...”

“Your sense of perspective is really good! And your ability to put so many characters together in a believable scene is crazy! When I roughly mapped out a grid things lined up really well. I think the...”

“I really like your style! It's honestly difficult to critique, but I'll try to help. I see that you're doing the loomis head method and it looks like you have a good understanding of form. I definite...”

“It's looking pretty good so far! I'm sure you will probably fix these things yourself as you continue to draw but I will try to help! -It looks like you struggling with form a bit. In the first phase...”

“Cool stuff! It's hard to give just a general tip because I'm sure a lot of the issues will just be solved as you continue to draw more, but I'll try to help! I think the best thing you could focus on...”

“This is so good. Doing an ambitious pose like this is so admirable! If you keep doing stuff like this and focusing on drawing, you're going to be one of the best fr. This is a difficult pose, but ho...”

“What a cool design! A good idea would be to hide the piece away for a week and come back to it and maybe see some things you'd change. It can be difficult to figure out what needs to be done, but hope...”

“Really cool art! I want to know more about them! It can be tough drawing a dark environment, but I'll try my best to help. I noticed that you went a bit crazy with the bounce light. I think some stu...”