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Your art style is gorgeous! I love it! Artwod censors are sensitive when I talk about the body so I put the critique into the image. Sorry about that! I hope you can still read it.
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This piece is fantastic! I love the grand sense of scale and the character's design - there's not much I would personally adjust/add. What I think could push it more would be using more of that atmospheric perspective you had on the distant rocks; using that blue on the further faces of more rocks to show the gradual increase in distance. Using the light source you established, I also tried to deepen the shadows on the inside of the cape (and brightened the most forward part of it) so the character has slightly higher contrast to draw the eye; as well as filling out the cast shadow where he's standing to account for the whole cape. Your composition and level of detail are wonderful, and it looks to me like you're getting a really good grasp on light and colour from this!
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Améliore tes ombres et ta maîtrise de la lumière, 3 min de lecture
Master pen and ink rendering through four progressive exercises: build value scales, shade basic forms, study organic objects, and create imaginary inventions using texture and light.
Rendering
6-5-2026
Day 5
Day 3
Controlled drawing , understanding shapes, shadows.
Day 5
I'm trying to be consistent guys!
6/5/2026
any critiques welcome (pls critique i wanna get better
Stylized characters
Still in the rough phase, but fixed some of the most obvious proportion mistakes. Still looking for feedback about proportions, particularly in the three-quarter view where the whole skull still feels off.
Daily sketch page, day 5
I got no time today since I need to work on other project, so just quick messy stuff today >.<
Sketch 04 - look behind you
Working on male proportions. Threw in an angry crystal ball wizard summoning a snake for fun.
June 5th Submission
June 5th Submission
Annabelle
This is my first time trying to finish a digital painting, everything else I've done are sketches, some with flat color layers. I'm slightly color blind which makes picking colors difficult without using the eye dropper directly from a reference. Here her pants originally turned out purple with my 3 year old daughter pointing it out, and my wife said her hair looked like she just got out of a chlorinated pool. I think I've since corrected these but wonder if anyone else struggles with this? Other than that I feel slow at the whole process but I guess that's just due to experience. Welcome to any other pointers people have.