@lena69184

“idk if adding more is the move yet. hat and staff already give her the witch read. maybe plant the stance first, one hip up and the other leg softer, then the cloak can follow that instead of hanging ”

“maybe the mouth reads off because it sits pretty low and wide under the nose. luffy's grin is more a shallow curve tucked closer up, corners inside the eye line. also keeping the top lip line thin and”

“maybe the folds arent really the issue. the hip block reads flat, so if you draw the pelvis as a box first and hang the pleats off that edge the triangles start pointing somewhere. also fewer folds, t”

“the orb and the flame are sitting on the props. maybe let them hit the ground and the clothes so the two figures share a space”

“kickstarter posters usually need one clear read. maybe push the character and fox a bit larger and keep the ground quieter so they pop”