maybe the mouth reads off because it sits pretty low and wide under the nose. luffy's grin is more a shallow curve tucked closer up, corners inside the eye line. also keeping the top lip line thin and letting the teeth stay one soft shape helps him stay himself

I'm trying to create an anime character named Luffy; I'm having a bit of trouble with the mouth. - Anime - Community Driven Art Feedback Platform

Salya Ardiansyah · 2026-08-30T13:28:18.857Z

I’m trying to sketch an anime boy face and the mouth keeps making him look like a completely different character. I’m probably messing up the proportions and shape language. Using Procreate here, would appreciate a critique

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I'm trying to create an anime character named Luffy; I'm having a bit of trouble with the mouth.

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