@varmun

“Hi! I did a quick little value manipulation to try and help out. I'm still learning values, but I think this achieves your goal. Making the smoke far, far darker and adding brighter values to the b...”

“Hello! I'll be focusing my feedback on anatomy, though there is a bit of perspective involved, too. The main thing I noticed was that for both of the characters, their hair did not follow the orien...”

“Ahoy! Here's a quick paintover I did to try and add some more volume to the image. The main thing I noticed is that you didn't have many hard edges on your shadows. It was all soft edges, which are...”

“Hi! I'm also still getting a handle on values, but I wanted to take a shot at helping you out. Take all that I say with a grain of salt. The main way that I try to address my values is to create a ...”

“Hi, it's me again. I think a lot of your colors are honestly pretty good, but I did make some tweaks to the base colors. I increased the saturation by a little bit to give her skin some more life, ...”

“Hi! I'm here to attempt useful critique. Wish me luck! So, overall, you've got a solid loomis head here. Given the anime proportions of the eyes, the divisions of the face are looking good. In a mo...”

“Hello! First off, fantastic character! I love the way your stylized the fire, and the expression is fantastic. I'm still trying to improve at my own lighting, so if you don't like what I did, no wo...”

“Hi! My first time giving feedback, so I hope this is at all useful and encouraging. First off, very cute character! And great job with this sort of perspective. It's really tough with the foreshort...”