Thank you for your feedback. Yep ! I didn't thought about that. I saw that the Ogre was kinda "Meh!" And I wasn't sure what to do with it. I Might come back with gouache and ink after the full Inktober. Thank you for your feedback guys!
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Inktober Day 9 - RAM
Artist's notes:
Decided to do the extra lines just for you guys (and because I felt it was a duty since I didn't posted it yet on instagram ^^) Thank you for your feedback !
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I love the series so far 🍿 I am not a comic expert but I feel like if you added more motion/crash lines and deeper shadow around ogre's body (center of crash) it would empathize the crash more and add some force to it - otherwise it might look like he is floating in the air. Cheers!
You can also blur the silhouette line of the ogre with small lines in the angle of the motion to imply speed. (Like when a photo is blurred due to a moving object)