@aherve

“Hello ! The feet of the table seems in perspective (for a short table). The side converge a bit too fast and suggest a lower vanishing point. It is subtle thought.”

“Really cool character design ! For me they don't give main characters videos though. I think their poses is too passive for that. I would place them as parental figures of the MC. If you want t”

“Really cute robot ! I have heard Antonio say it a couple of times : we tend to draw props too flat because we want to show them of. But this flatten the drawing and make strange posing poses. I ”

“I really like this character style. I am not a pro but for color I would use some complementary color for shadow and highlight (here orange and your background purple). I would strengthen the color”

“I don't find that amateurish at all ! I would maybe play with the shadows to have clear dark and light shape”

“Amazing drawing ! I'm far from an expert an this is just my personal take on it. I would darken the background to highlight the dragon. I would then use the orange emitted by the dragon has a ligh”

“Hello :) I think a first step you could take is train to draw straight lines, here I think you unconsciously wanted to reach a certain point and some lines curves themselves in order to achieve th”

“What a cute cover ! My personal opinion is to keep the lines :p. What I would rework might be the values. They are really similar. I tried something to illustrate my point but it is far from ”

“Hello, this illustration seems fun :) I think it depends on what you want the composition to convey. This currently put the focus on the character on the right. The left one is put out of focus”

“Really cool building I am not sure what you want exaclty ? architectural advice or construction RP ? I find the building on the left side strange => a military outpost whould not put an "extra r”

“Hello, I find the pose practise really promising ! For proportion : It was quite right except the legs. What I did was check the distance from the knee to hips, they match hips to shoulder on the”

“Not bad at all ! I disagree with you : it is not pretty bad, especially for a first drawing. Basic proportions are here: eyes at the middle of the face, 1 eye space between the eyes, the hairs are g”

“Hello ! Good work ! Here is some feedback to go a step further : The question to ask for each section is: do I put it in dark, medium or light. And then you have to be consistent: * One of ”

“Hello, Really cool pirate ! 2 point I found: * The right hand (on our left) is bigger than the other even if it is far away. * The nose and mouth are nealy facing us but the face is more turn”

“Hello You did find the right vanishing point. You just fall for the brain wanting to display all sides. Here the left side is practically invisible since the side is nearly above at the vanishi”

“Hello, I'm not an expert of the subject but what I understood is that the iris don't pop out, it's pop inward. BUT the transparent cornea pop outward. So the light is masked by the right border an”

“I think you did well for a timed study. To make the colours pops I would: - add a bit more contrast in the dark. - think of overlapping forms and values. The goal of this kind of studies is t”

“Why not :) I feel a bird is missing :p”

“Hello, Great painting ! From what I understood : you want to create an effect of light coming from behind and left. I would move the window to be clearly in the background for that to work. The”

“I really like this drawing ! I would work on the value to focus more on the figure. PS: I assumed you wanted to only use yellow tone. If not, I would add a blue light coming from the window to ”

“Hello. First I would say it is a really good drawing for a freehand one ! There is indeed a mistake with the verticals (in yellow) => It would be a 3PT perspective if they all converged to the sam”

“Hello, cool design ! Small nitpick : the feets are a bit weird (to small and 2D ?). The main point for dynamisum is the symmetrical pose : you have to break it if you want it to be less robot. F”

“Hello Really cool OC. I love the silhouette and vibe ! It's hard to say what to improve, I find the anatomy good (except maybe the waist is a bit small relatively to the leg/foot). But to real”

“Hello Really cool goblin ! I think the shadows are good (for a top light). I would put a bit more contrast and add a bit of highlight on top parts. What do you think of it ? PS: I push the con”