Hello ! I am far from an expert but here are some pointers I found : 1. your perspective tend to curve the more you go left. I don't think it's intentional. 2. For the depth of window you can use the perspective lines (green) 3. Your window are across the horizon, so you will see the top plane of the window (in Blue) 4. If you check with a basic cross you see the door is not centered between the windows (it is not an obligation but it takes up place you could have use for the left window) 5. You could add a second vanishing point for the lines inside the window (optional) (and the floor) 6. The square on the floor should get smaller the more you go away (to be mere dots near the horizon line) I hope that helps..
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Diner Interior Perspective
Artist's notes:
I’m trying to a draw diner scene but I haven’t used perspective in a long time and would greatly appreciate better trained eyes to point out my mistakes. This is the base idea, but it feels like I messed up somewhere and then more mistakes ended up following. I want the sidewalk and street and maybe a building or two across the street to be see through the windows and I want the windows to keep the ledge I’ve given them. The finer details aren’t too important to me right now, but if you’re willing to help add any please go ahead. The general idea is two large windows on either side on a single door, the entrance of a small 40s/50s diner. It’s important that the nearest window has enough space showing for a reflection of the main subject to be drawn in later.