@pifalo

“I think by just moving the legs apart a little, it will help add some gesture to the pose while keeping it calm. Also, adding some details to the clothes will help sell the perspective. I hope this he”

“The proportions aren't bad with exception of the head which is a bit too big. Also, you need some perspective on the raised arm and some gesture with the pose. I did a sketch that I hope helps :)”

“Your not that far off with the proportion. Instead of worrying about the anatomy, think about the shapes underneath. I hope the sketch helps :)”

“The pelvis is too high, if you work out the pose first you can make sure everything is where it belongs. I did a sketch to show you what I mean :)”

“The trick to make this work is to make sure you stack shapes on top of each other. I hope the sketch helps :)”

“It looks like your having your character run, so think about what that will look like. First of all, the arms and legs need to be opposite when a character is running and the body is usually twisting.”

“The easy fix would be to lower the forearm so that we can see the upper arm and shoulder. This will do away with the confusion and oddness of the arm. I hope this helps :)”

“I think the issue you are having with the sleave is that the folds are working against the perspective causing it to look flat. Easy fix, I hope this helps :)”

“Start with a good under drawing made of 3D shapes. Then add your anatomy and details. I hope the sketch helps :)”

“Try to avoid doing poses that are symmetrical, they tend to be stiff. The same with having the limbs at 90 degree angles. I did a quick sketch to show you what I mean, I hope it helps :)”

“Think about the perspective of the limbs. Using shapes at first will help work out the perspective ahead of time, then add the anatomy. I hope the sketch helps :)”

“It's best to use folds and wrinkles to describe the forms and perspective of the underlying anatomy. I did a quick sketch to show you how you could do it, I hope it helps :)”

“I think the ears are too close together and the neck is a bit thick. I did a quick sketch, I hope helps :)”

“I think the drawing is pretty nice and the proportions look good. I think you can add more shadows to give depth without it looking muddy. Make sure you choose a light direction and add shadows accor”

“Actually this is pretty nice. The lighting and the pose are nice, it just needs some anatomy and perspective help. I did a quick sketch to show you what I mean, I hope it helps :)”

“There are a couple of things that are probably bothering you. One is proportions, the right forearm is too long and the hair is a bit too big for the head. I did a quick sketch that I hope will help y”

“One of the things I noticed besides the anatomy, is the perspective of the arms. Notice you have the bands going straight across the forearms. This flattens them out and takes away the 3D effect. I d”

“So, before you start adding all the color variations and rendering, you should pick a light direction, and separate the shadow side from the light side. Once you have established that, it's way easier”

“To move the head to look like it is tilted back, you have to move all the features up and compress them a bit. Also, the left arm looks like it is going backwards. Try to make it feel like its coming ”

“Try building your figure from 3D shapes first to work out you proportions. Other than that, this is a nice drawing, I hope this helps :)”

“Try to move the arms and legs out a bit and add some gesture so that the pose isn't so stiff. I hope the sketch helps :)”

“Start by building the figure from 3D shapes over a gesture drawing. This will help you with the pose not being stiff and having the clothes fit right. I hope this helps :)”

“The proportions of the face are a little off and the neck feels too long. I did a quick sketch to show you how you can build the face and figure to work out your proportions :)”

“The proportions on this are good. I think if you build your figure from 3D shapes, you can add anatomy and details later. I hope the sketch helps :)”