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“Adding a bright highlight would be a start since glass is very reflective. Also rendering the hair to be more glossy too would pull off the glass like feeling too.”

“It feels like it could be made more dramatic/the lighting more clearer by making the shadows covering the front more darker. Also the lighting on the gold could be made better by also following the da...”

“It feels like the armor on your character's shoulders feel more like stickers than actual pieces of armor/metal wrapping around the shoulders and arms. So the form below the head is off.”

“In all honesty, the whole face is flat due to lack of depth. Start with a sphere to help guide where the head is facing and as a guideline for where facial structures are supposed to wrap around the h...”

“Your highlights and shadowsdidn’t seem to make sense with the light source. The highlights should be closer together. Treat hair as if it were simplified forms of ribbons to make more sense of the li...”