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“You have really advanced with your form, anatomy, shadows, and especially story as well! With the first you have biker guy speeds across highway for some reason and oh hey a turtle, while with the new...”

“I think you have drastically improved with your understanding of form. With the first the shading comes off as very flat and the features paste on. With the newest you can tell you understand the stru...”

“One thing I think you might wanna consider, think about the materials more, like those kinds of tables are really glossy, bounce light everywhere, and you can see the reflections of the plates and the...”

“I think the object they are picking up doesn’t look as though on the same flat plane they are kneeling on, looks as though the object was falling, not lying flat.”

“I LOVE the design, not great with values myself, so can’t offer advice there, perhaps a desaturated gold flower patter on the armor?”

“Okay, noticed I turned the angle of the skateboard somewhat and would see slightly more of the legs than I drew, yet my following reasoning still applies. I love the background and that and the per...”

“Follow-through, think that’s what you need here - showing the end of an action portrays more movement and energy. You can add action lines that show a whoosh of air, or since that’s a wand, have an ar...”

“I think the silhouette works well overall. Recommend writing down the things you struggled with during a drawing. That’ll help you with a direction of what you should work on next.”

“I really like your colors and don’t have advice there. The main thing’s your proportions, the head too big and and the left screen arm too small, so I adjusted those, added some neck we’d see there, e...”

“Not a color expert either, though I thought you had a few too many colors going on and from what I do know you usually want a dominant color, and with the size of the cloak I thought red would be the ...”

“Okay, the biggest thing here is the perspective, everything seems slanted, like the table looks tilted toward us, draw the top as a cylinder, should appear more flat, generally your convergence with t...”

“Okay, my focus is the screen right leg and foot, with the reference photo you see how their leg is wrapping around the middle branch and their foot has serious bend happening as it presses into the ot...”

“Biggest issue I think’s that the head is reaaally small comparatively with the rest of the body; you can measure with the hands, which when placed over the face go from chin to about halfway up the fo...”

“You’re very close, though you are drawing parts of the face as though her head is straight and not at an angle. You see how the line on the reference goes down the center of the nose, lips, and chin, ...”

“I think your depth’s going well, you have at least six layers, and the perspective is good as well. What I noticed, as you said, overall similar values, yet also the colors are nearly the same, like h...”

“Hey there, you have achieved pretty good proportions with your stick figure, and stick figures are a really great starting point, especially when you wanna practice different and dynamic poses. Think ...”

“I think what you can do is push your darker shadows more, specifically the shadow beneath the hat around the eyes, have that the darkest. Having that and, some other shadows, darker allows you more va...”

“Okay, grain of salt, please, I struggle with these things as well. Anyway, I think the shape of the snout is good, though the angle sliiiiightly off, with the head pointed more screen right, the snout...”

“There’s a Classroom video on ArtWod explaining fully (and better) called “Creature Design Basics” under the Advanced section, available with Premium tier, yet anyway: Recommend you have a dominant ...”