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Follow-through, think that’s what you need here - showing the end of an action portrays more movement and energy. You can add action lines that show a whoosh of air, or since that’s a wand, have an arc of magic that goes from where the action would have started and follow along the path of the wand so you have a visual representation of that action. Recommend more bend with the torso and pushing the head forward as well, even more so than I did.
Improve your fundamentals, a 3 min read
Master shadow mapping through four progressive exercises—from simplified Loomis and Asaro heads to analyzing real paintings and experimenting with different light sources.
Portraits
June 30 Challenge - Day 1
Practicing Trek characters and attempting illustrating a scene from a book.
Daily sketch page, day 2
Trying to incorporate stuff I learned from portrait road. Drew my OC this time. Struggling with keeping face looking the same in all angles (and fail :x)
David
One thing I constantly struggle with is rendering it always feels as if I’m missing a step or theirs a gap between my knowledge. Feel free to critique my lighting, shading, and etc.
Day 2 Jacqueline's Sketchbook
A Knysna Turaco bird in Art Nouveau style
Mermaid
Made improvment of the hands.
WIP Jay Enhypen
I am struggling with capturing his face from my refrence, I made a mistake with choosing my reference a bit, I chose the refrence pose where the face wasn't fully visible and used other refrence for his face so I had to adjust the face angle and how he is looking at the viewer which led to facial structure changes, I can't add my reference in this site because it doesn't support more images. I want you to help me with how do I make look more like Jay.
Page 2 (day 2)
Page 2 (day 2) Trying to be consistent with the challenge. In this drawing, can someone teach me how to make simple backgrounds? ( Other adivces is good too!)
2 sketchbook page
Some arm studys. I wanted to practice the anatomy for the ice arm of the eleven archer character
About linework in general
I finished it by adding this little walrus imp thing. I believe this is currently the absolute limit of my abilities. If there is anything to improve in this i am currently blind to it. I see this as a problem, since if i do not recognize my mistakes i cannot improve further, therefore if anyone can poke holes in this it would be deeply appreciated. Or maybe i should just start learning values already, since linework is kinda the only thing i've ever done.