I really like your colors and don’t have advice there. The main thing’s your proportions, the head too big and and the left screen arm too small, so I adjusted those, added some neck we’d see there, enlargened the pelvis/legs and think that helped. I love the piece though and would enjoy seeing more of them and your work; recommend joining the ArtWod Discord where you can tag me - name’s Ian, the Community Support there. | Artwod Feedback