@denndrite

“First off, beautiful work on the form and the character! The reason so much of the form seems to have disappeared is that your lineart is all just one size for everything, which flattens everything...”

“From what I can see you seem to know what to aim for regarding form, so I want to point out two other things: proportions and confidence. Proportions vary a lot from person to person, and depending...”

“The first thing I noticed about the perspective is that, while correct, it's messing with the composition. The way they converge is creating a few invisible "arrows" pointing somewhere with no visual ...”