I think it’s looking rough because the line weights for the boxes and cylinders are the same. Try drawing the boxes with pencil or with and thinner line or vice versa. The contrast between line weights might help clarify the forms.

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Anonymous · 2026-07-01T16:33:24.735Z

Trying to learn how to draw cylinders within the same scene so I’m starting off with drawing them in boxes it looks pretty rough not sure why.

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