Forgot to attach the overdrawing on the written feedback :p
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Yāsiboy
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The arms and waist are throwing me off. Any help?
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Hey! Nice character! The main issue I see is that the proportions are a little off, particularly in the torso. The belly button is too close to the chest, which makes the torso look too short. It should be positioned lower; remember that the belly button is located around the third head. :) Adjusting the proportions this way makes the pose look better. :) I also adjusted the length of the character’s left arm a little, since it was slightly too short. Hope this helps!
idk if more detail will fix the waist. maybe draw a soft center line from the chest into the pelvis first, then wrap the belt around that tilt so the arms and waist feel like they share the same turn
maybe keep that center line super simple first, then wrap the belt and waist around the same tilt so the arms feel like they share the turn